Loved the story and especially loved the final ending. Thank you for writing.
Mickey Hall

Such a beautiful story, than you for sharing your talented words with us.

Great epilogue for a great story. Loved Edward's point of view!

Hot, hot, HOT!

What an absolutely amazing ending! It was perfect! I love how she told him she was pregnant. I adored his reaction to finding out. What a beautiful scene that whole 'May' part was. Really good. Then off to 'August' and their wedding. Could've done without the puking part, yuck. All the other parts were great. I loved that he couldn't wait any longer and ran up the aisle to get her. The whole ceremony was beautiful. So many emotions for the both of them. Coming to 'February' and her mood swings in full force. She was all over the place. It was funny that the insatiable pair, suddenly weren't having hot monkey sex in her last trimester was really surprising. That's when most women want it more and more frequently. Yet, they hadn't had sex in two months. The call to Jasper for Taco Bell, was hilarious. Citing that he'd run to three DQ's to find what Ali needed. I loved that Emmett was there with him. They did end up with their baby girl. Edward's vision came true. Greedy me wants a future take of him having massive success in his music career and her still teaching the wee ones. Thank you for giving us so much more with his POV in this. I enjoyed it through his eyes. ~Christy

This was FANTASTIC in his point of view. Holy crap it was so intense through his thoughts, words and passion. The proposal was so very much better in his version. This chapter was phenomenal and I truly thank you for it.

It was really sweet that Emmett and Edward had that moment together. Just the two of them. I'm glad that Emmett shared Bella's state to Edward. He wanted to know and deserved to learn what she went through. I'm very glad I'm reading both versions, as Edward coming to the conclusion that they've abandoned their friends and thinking it may be a good idea to reconnect, was so much better in his POV. In her version, it came of very differently. Almost as if he was pushing her away from him. When in fact he's wanting even more from her and trying to find a balance. It has only been six weeks, so it's not like they've been in a bubble for a year. So that's a good thing. Even though he mentioned balancing things out in her version, it still resonates stronger in his version. Yes, very glad to be reading both versions.

Goodness, that was rough to read the first time. His version was just as rough. Interesting that they both vomited up everything in them.

Yes, that was extremely hot in his view. Bella's definitely came across a lot more romantic, than his. Which makes sense, as it is the man's view versus the woman's. Very well done.

That chapter was so much fun to read! I loved him hanging with his brother's, getting drunk. Jasper raiding Bella's frig was hilarious. Emmett being the DD and giving the other two shit. Really fun chapter. Too bad they didn't get Tanya, as that would've been great to have Emmett and Jasper backing his ass up, in front of her.

It was good to hear the actual conversation between Kate and Edward. I'm still very suspicious of Kate, she is Tanya's sister after all. Her loyalty is with her, not him. I still think the break up should've happened with her at Kate's back east. I have no idea what you have planned but, I'm sure harm to one or both, BxE, is inevitable.

That was really fun through his eyes. Being in his head is so enjoyable.

You were right. That was so much hotter in his point of view. *fans self*

I'm still glad you've done his views on different things. I thought for sure when he'd showered in that hotel room, that he pumped one out to relieve his tension. Yet, you surprised me and he hadn't done that. His revelation that he wants children with Bella and the way it popped into his head, just so randomly, was fun to read. His picturing a little girl, with his hair, running up to her. I can see that. The way the world went away from him when staring into her eyes on the piano bench. Yes, it is lovely to be inside his head.

That was fantastic! That kid cracks me up . . . pimp tight . . . lol. How sweet is it that Edward told Masen he loves Bella but, not to tell her because it is a secret. Awwwwww.