Oh MAN! This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL! Things like this, rare gems of unbelievably powerful emotional love is so what makes the life of a fanfiction reader worth living! How many things do you see in life that touch you in a way that is this powerful! You are an UNBELIEVABLY good author and yet somehow even after writing something like this you STILL think that you aren't very good? My God, you are an absolute wonder! You have a level and class all your own equaled by by I don't know who. Sweet Lion... The only others who reach these kinds of greatness in writing that I can think of are elecktrum, Sentimental Star, Allyson, and a few others I can't think of. PLEASE, do NOT underestimate yourself. Listen, YOU ARE A MAGNIFICENT WRITER.

And nothing, except for you, can ever, EVER, change that.

This was lovely! Poor boys though ... they fight so hard to keep Narnia safe ... but I just really love how they care for each other!
Thank you for sharing this sweet little thing with us :)

Awww, this is a lovely fic!

So, Peter and Edmund got hurt but Peter only got hurt because he was too worried about Edmund. Awww, the vicious and tender cycle of brotherly love at its finest, people. :D

I love it! Keep up the amazing work!

The ending was adorable!

I don't even know where to begin, I fully, wholeheartedly, LOVE this little story. Not only is it adorable and spot-on when it comes to their personalities and behavior, but you have a way of writing that makes the story go forward almost by itself, it's amazing how easily everything fits together. And I couldn't help but laughing during Edmund's harangue, that too was really spot-on! And of course the ending was truly adorable...
In short, I loved everything about it. Keep up the good work! :)

/Linguam

Very VERY nice. I love the last few lines.

Do I stare in shock at the amazingness of what I just read or laugh because Edmund was just downright hilarious? Mmm... *opts for both*

Wow, was that ever good! I love how you built everything slowly; it kept me curious about the "hovering". Peter was so Peter, Edmund was so Edmund (you actually had me laughing in the middle of his tirade). I love the bantering (and yelling) between the two: great expression, great subtext.
I was wondering about your use of "baring" though. I know you've got a great command of the English language and "baring" does make sense, though I couldn't help but wonder if you'd meant "bearing"? Small question, but anyway.
Thoroughly enjoyed this fic; keep it up!

Ariel_of_Narnia

AMAZING! It was fabulous! I cant even describe it!

This was amazing! I love your writing!

Oh. My. Lion.

That was fabulous! I love Peter and Edmund fics. I don't have a big brother, but I do have a little one, and I understand the absolute terror when your little bro is in (or you think he's in) danger. I can tease him all I want, but let someone else bully him? Oh heck no. That's when crouching sister hidden dragon comes out and roars for blood.

Anywhoo...fave!

Awww, I love these brothers! Thanks for writing such a beautifully told, sweet, cute, and wonderful fic like this! Oh, and thanks a ton for the vocabulary. Now I needn't look them up on Google to know their definitions . . . Haha!

AWWWW i love how peter sooo protective I love peoter and Edmund!

Awww, too sweet.

I love the brothers together and bickering.

"You hovered."

BWAHAHAHAHAH!

Well done.

This is sweet. I love Golden Age fics, and this shows a great dynamic among the sibs.

Good story. I totally agree with Edmund; being sick is awful. :)

I love your words, do you read the dictionary? Or do you have another way to learn such fascinating words?

You characterise everyone quite well, and is it just me, or is this the second story of yours I've read today in which Lucy's sick, the other being Monochrome.

-Dyslexic Nerd