A great story so far! I look forward to reading more!

I really am enjoying this crossover and I can see this meshing well with one another.
It's at this point in the 'sorta follows some canon points' that I always hope someone helps Sirius out and keeps him from falling to Pettigrew's and Dumbledore's nasty schemes.

But then, I've always had a soft spot for those Black sons and I'm guessing he won't be included in this story beyond mere mentions, if at all.

*Sirius would make a useful cohort on the Wizarding side (if he engages all his Black ancestry) and Jareth sees him worthy, after training him up a bit.
Plus that would put a huge dent in Dumbledore's nose as Sirius, along with Alice Longbottom, has the main custody of Harry in the Wizarding world at this point.*

P.S. Never mind my ramblings, your story set off my "What if's"
So I guess I'll go play my wonderings with my Discord buddies, we love chasing those random rabbitts down!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon

I've always belived Jareth's character to be VERY Dark...at least compared to what most people seem to think.

He is the very ephitomy of a sociopathic, spoiled Prince in the movies at least. And Prideful to the point in which he believes what he tells Sara is romantic. (Personally I think it is VERY romantic, but I also thiink Horror of Our Love and Tom Riddle's "romantic" gestures...usually involving someone's death and/or blood is romantic, sooo...)

If he, for some reason or other (like Voldemort being foolish enough to attack the goblin nation, which I think he never actually did tho...not thw first war anyway, but who knows...?) then I believe Jareth would be VERY vindictive.

Of course, I presume there is some kind of Fae law/disgust with horcruxes, based on his reactions, in your story. Which is entierly possible. Goblins and Fae follow laws and moral codes that tend to befuddle, suprise, and generally terrify most humans in the stories and legends of them at least.

And I personally believe Jareth is a Fae rather than a goblin hinself, based on his looks.

(I also would not be suprised if the goblins he rules over is children based on their stupidety. xD Maybe adult goblins..aka...goblins over, like 216 or some odd number years...go traveling to earn money and/or work on smithing and jewelcrafting...)

Theories aside...

Brilliant beginning to an intriguing plot! :D

And please, PLEASE keep dumbles IN-character! I BEG you!

I may hate the manipulative-for-the-greater-good goodie-two-shoe goat, but he IS a good guy who's driven by guilt and regret and can't get himself to kill even Voldemort. (Which is annattitude that hurts more people than it helps. But he means well.)

I can sense that anyone raised by Jareth won't shy away from using the Dark Arts and live by a different set of morals than humans, which would make him coash horribly with dumbles.

And I hope that you are aa great at writing and understanding people aa your story makes it seem thus far.

I look forward to see your next chapter!

I'm really enjoying this. Thanks for posting. Love what you did / are doing with the horocruxes.

Sweeetttttt! I'm so excited to have the revised version now!

Nice! Does that mean that Harry isn’t a horcrux? Can’t wait for the next chapter!

I can't wait!

Wow! I do like the reboot. I think Jarerth makes a great dark character, and then he turns around and is gentle with Harry. I love it!

Interesting. Jareth captures Voldemort's spirit pieces and has plans to destroy the Horcruxes. And then he takes Harry.

Dumbledore is going to have an interesting time with this.

I look forward to reading your next installment.

Sincerely,
Miriam

Awesome.

Love it ! Plz, update soon !

DANCE MAGIC DANCE !

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Love it. Hope to see more.