This was amazingly beautiful.

Aw i really liked this :)
It was really sweet and the writing style was nice too

Omg that was really beautiful, all these emotions plus the song. It made me cry a litte. ;_;

So beautiful! o A very nicely written fic~!

First time indeed…

I thought that it was very beautiful and I enjoyed reading it

Quite lovely. I'm glad I stumbled upon it.

Wow. That. Was. . .

Especially when they first kissed, the descriptions were so brilliantly done, and I unsconsciously held my breath while reading. Oh my heart!

Absolutely well written! 8D

love that song )

firsts are always the most important; great idea.

great job too kanda actually cares XD

keep it up D

sweet. love the last bit about not being alone. that made me smile yes.

Really... I haven't words for this. It make me cry, I don't know why. I really REALLY loved it.

~ from Spain )

*reviewing for this one as well* though this isn't my favorite pairing *doesn't mind it though, depending on how it's written*

"he had with Kanda of all people" -something about that right there is phrased odd (with the rest of the sentence that it's in) I think something was left out by accident. ;

also "off" doesn't need to be there (but I understand what you mean even if it's still there. Sounds like his anger is falling 'off' though...which is interesting to picture in my head XD)

Ah yes. The One Bed scenario *snicker* that was really sweet though *likes Allen's characterization*

*the kiss scene was very well done*

"and Allen wondered what had stopped them" -loved the end there *nod*

(Kanda patting Allen on the head though...? Sounds more like a 'Lavi' thing to do, to be honest)

"no secrets because there were no answers for no questions asked. The hourglass across from the bed reflected them, their movements, their rhythm caught in a mirror that did not reflect back upon the world, but rather that absorbed the perfect image and held it in secret" -liked those two *counts* yeah two sentences as well~

"as if he were" -were should be 'was'

Other than that. This was really good *nod* Need to get used to Kanda in that role (of initiating things) but yeah. Need to get used to it somehow, right?

This fic was beautifully written and eerily enticing. In other words...

IT WAS TEH AWESOME! :D But, honest, really good fic. Thanks for it.

Ohayou!

I liked the fic, it was very nice.

Indeed, a question... I can translate at Spanish your fic?

Sayonara!

aw that was so sweet i loved it

Hey, I really liked your first times story! It was really well written and you have an amazing writing style. It was so vivid, I've read some other stories that were kind of like this but they weren't nearly as good. You captured every emotion the character had perfectly!

Later,

Black Rose Tattoo