Loved every bit of this story. You really did human Edward and Bella proud.

BLJ

I very much enjoyed this story, with the exception of the chapter entitled Concerns. I could not believe that Bella was still that insecure, after everything he showed her day in and day out. I think I understand why James and Jake fizzled out with her, if she was even minutely that insecure with them, it would be so very draining. I was glad that Edward made her tell him what was wrong, as she kept refusing leading up to it. For her being so good at her job, I expected her to be a lot stronger. I was happy that Edward attempted, yet again, to set her straight. Hopefully, that was and will be, the last time he had to do that. Again, I really enjoyed this. Very good ending, with him asking her to design their home. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~Christy

such a beautiful story i loved it

Hi,
Okay, please don't take this the wrong way, but there are a few things I think could make this already good story a great one.

You have a brilliant premise, but the emotions fall a little flat.

It's also kind of confusing as to why Bella didn't know that Edward was a doctor when she read that on his bio in the mag. Why was he so forgettable to her? She met him at the airport, and thought he was good looking, yet she couldn't place him when she saw the picture?

Also, there are no details as to the feelings she may have towards Edward nor is there anything about Edward's reaction to her. To ask her out, he must find her mildly attractive, yet there is no detail about that. For her to accept - she must also like something about him enough to say yes.

Lastly, but not least - The Date. For a first date, there is nothing spectacular about it that would make the reader think that Bella would consider moving forward with him. And he asked her on date (FIRST date!) and had no clue on where to take her? He actually settled on grabbing a sandwich and eating on a park bench? That's not first date worthy! That's more like a fifth or sixth date when they are more comfortable with one another! Where's the romance? Where's the fireworks? The giddiness of acheiving a date with your crush?

I'm not being mean and I hope you don't take it that way. I just think there could be more to this already good story, that's all.

soooo i just finished "when the right one comes alng" what happened to all their little babies! i with there were babies! : D

i would say make me babies... but that sounds wrong, so i will go with... in you head how many kids do they have? :D

:)

amazing story I love it

Quick question. Why have you written it so that Rose and Em's engagement over takes Bella and Edwards wedding?

Would you want someone proposing at your wedding which is suppose to be the day about a couples love. Hence the saying "Their day". Don't you think it rains on the couples parade?

awwwwwww! perfeeect story! really! it was so beutiful!

i really loved every little thing!

I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

There's just one thing1 i'm sying to see the pictures but the photoshop link doesn't go through! pleasee pleaseee check it!

i love your stories too much and i want to be able to see them also! thx!

xoxo, Anna

Getting back to this story and am enjoying it.

Enjoyed your story. :)

Nice set up for the "boys." Edward, like Bella from Ch. 1 seems to be well-rounded. The fact that he's successful, yet modest again captures the essence of S.M.'s character but gives him room for growth in the romantic area. All-in-all, this one seems to be building to a well-rounded story. I found myself almost forgetting to post a review so I could see the next developments. As before, good balance of narrative and dialogue. Keep it up!

So far so good. this story seems to have a good set up. I like the more confident Bella. In this case she still has the essence of the S.M.'s "Bella," but she seems to be a much more multi-dimensional character. The premise seems set up a great plot. I can't wait to see how Edward ties into this world! I also like the balance of narrative to dialogue. Keep up the good work. I like your style and flow!

have u ever thought about make a sequel where the ex's come back or maybe they have trouble conceiving? its just an idea.