| Reviews for Days of Our Lives |
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ajani's apprentice chapter 6 . 6/24/2015 Yes! Fox and Krystal for the win! I really support that ship. |
ajani's apprentice chapter 1 . 6/12/2015 Licario has a lot to learn. Love this already. A And i get the mystery of mew thing. |
The Nevermore Raven chapter 5 . 11/12/2011 D'aw! Cute. Fuzzy wants a simple bar of chocolate? He's missing out! I couldn't imagine his initial reaction to a hot smore! Or hot brownies! Yummy... |
The Nevermore Raven chapter 4 . 11/12/2011 X3 AWWW! Kirbeh! Pink Marshmallow! ...Hm. What if Kirby actually swallowed Lucario? I mean... you know what I mean, as in not during a brawl? Like he swallowed the tin can? |
The Nevermore Raven chapter 3 . 11/12/2011 LOL! The scene about Ganondorf! XP! LOLLLLLLOLOLOL! ~N.R. |
The Nevermore Raven chapter 2 . 11/12/2011 Falco had a valid point. As far as I was concerned, I decided the chest spike must go, but the paw spikes stay. Then Lucario can sleep on his belly... and be hugged! ; |
The-mighty-rhodes chapter 7 . 7/6/2011 This is pretty good, Humour isn't your best genre but it's brilliantly written and still an amazing series. As I’ve said before I love your interpretation of Lucario, and you are a very talented writer. It’s nice to see a different aspect of his character and his interactions with the other smashers. So well done on an amazing fic. -Rhodes- |
Jurassic Lion chapter 5 . 6/12/2010 aw that chapter was sweet! |
goawayI'mdeadhahaha chapter 2 . 12/11/2009 By "Satoshi", you mean Ash Ketchum, right? Very nice story, though. |
Froggiecool chapter 7 . 7/29/2009 Well, it's great. Take a break, if you're running short of ideas. |
lupyne chapter 7 . 7/27/2009 I had a feeling that was how you would end this story, but it still made a powerful impact when I read the "Fox v Falco, Battlefield" bit. It's quite sad to think what will happen next to them... Anyhow, this was a great chapter; I never thought of fleas affecting them before. There were many nicely-worded sentences, like how Fox left a line of drool on the wall. Seven seems to be your magic number - all your stories so far have seven chapters. Congratulations on completing this! It's sad to see this end, but I'll be on the lookout for your future fics. Good luck! I know you'll do well. |
NinjaSheik chapter 7 . 7/26/2009 COOL~! UPDATE SOON! |
Souldin chapter 7 . 7/26/2009 Once again, a wonderful chapter with great humor and the thought of Lucario and Snake's tussle is amusing. Lucario's out of character sudden knocking away the can and razor was amusing. A bit longer than your previous chapters, this one flowed nicely and its a shame I probably won't be seeing these for a while. I wish you luck on your other fanfictions in the meantime then! Once again, great chapter. |
Shadow R-B chapter 7 . 7/26/2009 Yet, the bird still goes back, mindless if another batch of fleas await... Ah, that was a fun fiction to read, hawk! Hopefully, ideas come back to you someday, huh? Well, hope you luck with your stuffs! - Ja, ne! ~Shadow |
Shadow R-B chapter 6 . 7/20/2009 Aw, that was a cute chapter~! Yeah, plus that Rukario are a "rare breed" doesn't help much on that, does it. _U Hope ya update sometime soon~! ~Shadow |