This was an interesting piece on Kira. I liked his reflection on who he was in the academy days and who he became in Gin's shadow. Hopefully things then out well for him

Woah this was great. I just love the inner struggle Izuru has with himself and the gaping contrast between current Kira and young Kira. Overall great oneshot with compelling emotion and writing. :)

Very, VERY interesting story! I especially liked the world you created for Wabisuke. It held me breathless.

The only critique I can think to offer is that Momo seems a little mature to the point of being OOC-but that might make sense to you due to her promotion.

Great story!

Amazing oneshot kay you have a pretty good bad not many people read you make another oneshot giving details of the result of their conversation

Beatiful.