That was fucking awesome to read! Listening to the aliens soundtrack made this that much better, but non the less this was fucking amazing! Keep being State of the badass art!

sorry that not alot of people reveiwed to ya this is a good story

um you got the title from that ps2 game cause i rented it and do you now were to buy it cause the game was fun but kept freezing so could you reply and you have good taste in games

Good story, there was never any confusion. Everything made sense. Your writing style will improve, all it takes is practice. Keep it up! I enjoyed it. Did you notice towards the end that sometimes it is better to leave the gory details to our imagionations? I also liked the nonconfrontational sexual tension, that's hard to pull off well but you did.

Very good, I really liked I a lot. As for not having any new ideas, how about the one I suggested? I'd write it myself, but I'm not as infinitely familiar with the source material as you are.

I wonder what WILL happen next?

Greetings,

So far so good with your story. I'm planning a re-read so that i can get the concept in one fell swoop...i'm a little lost at the moment.

Keep it coming though!

-Cap'n Razz

PLEASE update!

This is one kickass story!

I liked the chapter but one thing just kinda got me; in the middle of battle predators don't just grab a human and pull off their masks, if the battle was over u should have put down "the creatures on all fours took off down the tunnel" for some reason anything is possible really and i like the way ur going with this story. And what about the queen what happened to her did she take off with the other aliens. Please update this story though but besides that i really liked it.

lol sry i just read the review thingys...lol very funny

lol this story is very intresting,ive been meaning to coment but ive only been on fanfic on my but dude i like how it relates to the game. Dont writing it dude! u ROCK