Updateeee

Really good read..a disappointment that it hasn't been updated in well over a year...do you think that you'll come back tout, maybe? I hope so!
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Woohoo! I'm caught up! I like a good sex scene but some people take it to a level that even makes me blush, so yeah, no worries with that there lol. This story is pretty fast paced, which I don't mind, but it might be helpful to put a little timeline at the beginning of the chapters, just so I know exactly how far it is. Other than that, really liking this story!

Another nice chapter! My heart goes out to Gohan in so many ways. You're very good at depicting him. Great add!

That last sentence was very powerful! A nice way to end the chapter. As far as the angst, I don't think it's too much, but then again I love the angst so I don't know if there could ever be too much. And also, I mean, this timeline is pretty darn depressing, no way around it really.

Wow this chapter made me teary eyed. A very nice depiction of goku's final moments and not too overdramatic. I hope you plan on continuing this fix because you are a nice storyteller!

So far this story seems interesting. Not sure how invested you are in it at this point but if you still are, I'm enjoying it!

This is such a great story. I love your writing style on this one as well. And I'm so angry that it's been over a year since you updated! T.T I want MOAR! *sniff sniff*

Gotta say after reading this fic, you are an incredably talanted author. This story is so dramatic, so angisty, its insane. I don't have much to say, cpt, keep up the amazing work.

Oh trust me. It is working. Very well.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *bursts into treats* sniff... so...so sad. You do the emotions the characters are feeling so well.

Argh... damn it, only the second chapter and already I feel like crying. Really love the gohan/goku dynamics.

Omg, let me just say that I am very excited to be reading this. I've always loved Mirai timelines that were well written and this looks awesome.

I'm not going to lie - I was so ready to click that next button only to realize there wasn't one. This is a really good story. It's well written and all the characters are "in-character." I hope you update soon!

-Sapphirina

This is a really great story and i hope you havent lost interest in it. The way you describe what they feel and how they see things is just brilliant. Its very realistic, raw and are an excellent writer and i hope you update soon :)

Kyra