Brilliant, as usual. I especially loved Truths That She Learned. Your writing flows so well, and your Galinda and Elphaba are perfectly characterised. Can't wait for the next installment!

Ok, so reading this update in public was probably not the cleverest idea I've ever had- I ended up having to put my sunglasses on so that people wouldn't see my teary eyes!

But quite honestly, this is one of the heartbreaking accounts of Glinda's seperation from Elphaba that I've read. Everything about it was so real, and the journal was a lovely touch- I'm glad there was the one little note about Glinda in there.

Also, it's only just dawned on me that this is chapter seven, and that means that chapter ten- the last chapter- will be 'The Way That She Died.' This makes me very sad- even though I suppose it's an inevitability where bookverse Wicked is concerned :(.

I just discovered this and I'm so glad I did! It's so sweet and sad, especially this chapter. I love how you've kept the characters and the story so true to the book, and your writing is beautiful. I usually like to put some criticism in my reviews, but I honestly can't fault this. It's exactly what the summary says: a series of drabbles, and yet it's much more than that. Please keep going with this!

Q: Could anything be better than RENT or Wicked? A: Yes- something that combines them both- like Idina, or your drabbles! Sorry, I'm here because it's half three in the morning, I can't sleep and I am deplorably coffeeless (I'm for measuring in cups of coffee, by the way...) so if this lacks coherence... that's why... The basic point I believe I was trying to make was that I love the idea and peices so far, and am excited for Laughter and Strife!

WOW! just .. wow this story is amazing! i just loved it when elphaba said "5 minutes then back to your own bed." it really shows how childlike galinda is. i love this, please continue! :D

Please, please, please, continue this story!

Every chapter impresses me more than the last one, and I've read them at least five times each! Your take on Elphaba and Glinda is so in character and easy to fall in love with that I could put any of these Gelphie drabbles between chapters of the actual book... or musical? Booksical? All of your Wicked works are great, but I think this one really fills in parts of the story line that were missing before.

Thanks for being Gelphie royalty.

I rather like this. Well done.

I really loved this last chapter. A lot.

Excellent detail in this.

Well done.

Well done

Wow. Cool

Odd but wonderful. Heh. :)

Nice. Good.

Neat

I love your comparison of between lychee and Elphaba - you captured her nature very well with this.

But the whole story is very good - you've real talent to write.

Please keep writing - I am very curious how you'll get on with this.