| Reviews for Heart's Fate |
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sesshomarusdancer chapter 9 . 1/23/2017 Hey, just wanted to let you know that I really enjoy this story. I like how you are integrating it into the events of the series. How long until we get some more backstory for Akira? I am really curious about her scars, but I'm also intrigued by this dance routine of hers. I'm a dancer... lol |
The Otaku Lady Priya chapter 9 . 1/19/2017 Update! FINALLY! You don't know how long we've waited! Glad to see you are updating again! Keep it up! Please don't hang up on us again :) |
The Otaku Lady Priya chapter 8 . 8/19/2016 Amazing, great work done! Akira is a really great OC (yes a little shy... but really brave and forward when needed) and I loved her friend Kumori. She and Kurama actually suited like siblings. The plot is amazing and the humour too. I love the pillow fight rules and I'm now using too (hey! They sounded fun!) I also loved Akira's elder sister behaviour that is really responsible and caring. Please continue! Love your story ;) |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/8/2016 Its great keep up the good work :) |
Deja Vu 22 chapter 8 . 5/27/2016 I know the feeling of not getting many reviews. But you totally deserve thousands of them, so here you go. This story is really fun to read and I have been enjoying it greatly. Are you going to pair Hiei with Kumori and Kurama with Akira? I think I would enjoy that. Anyway, keep it up! |
Moon-on-a-string chapter 8 . 5/17/2016 I just found this story and I can't stop reading it! The ending of this chapter was so cute! Keep up the good work! |
Yuyuyashashow99 chapter 8 . 5/16/2016 This is an awesome fanfic and i reallh hope you continue the reboot! Yours is some of the best writing i've read in a while (and trust me, i've read a LOT of fanfiction.) I'd be super excited to read more chapters of this! |
LadyEllesmere chapter 8 . 5/15/2016 Love it so far |
LizardXero chapter 8 . 5/14/2016 Long time reader first time reviewer, I have to say this story is great so far. You have done a good job capturing Kurama and his gentle spirit. I always loved how Kurama was not just a one dimensional character like Yusuke and Kuwabara seemed to be on the surface in the early parts of the anime. Please continue this story I look forward to it, I have been a fan since your original version several years ago. Thank you. P.S. maybe a couple moments of Kumori and Hiei |
TheBucklingBridge chapter 6 . 2/19/2016 I'm really enjoying the reboot and looking forward to the next chapter! I'm super impressed at how well you're juggling such a large amount of characters, though after the initial portal entrance Hiei kinda disappeared. Just a note for later on ;p |
TheBucklingBridge chapter 5 . 11/29/2015 Wow, you're juggling a lot of characters right now. I'm interested to see the roles you have planned for them all. |
Angel of Randomosity chapter 4 . 10/11/2015 Aaaaawwwwweeeeeee poor girl |
Heve-chan chapter 3 . 4/26/2015 Here again... :) Reading the beginning, I remember how quickly Akira gets embarrassed and how sweet she is when she's being picked on by Kumori. ;)) She's a really nice and refreshing character. I feel like I could be best friends with her, if she'd be real. :)) BTW, do you base your characters on real life people? Well, not necessary every aspect of their personalities, but certain traits... I know I do this. Also, real life situations too! (no pun intended!) And there is the rest of the family... really, how did you get such an idea? So many characters and personalities, everyone with his or her own unique individuality... Man, that's huge! Don't you find it hard to remember them all? ;)) I've tried but this chapter, I really couldn't remember them all or place a name with a "face"/story this time. Well, maybe because that's what happens to me when meeting new people but still! And even though I know in big lines how certain things are going to develop for certain characters... now I'm really confused about the canon you are thinking about. Is it Kazuya Hatanaka, the one that will become Shiori's husband? or Kamiya, the 'Doctor' ? :D I've checked them but... they are the only people coming to mind now... :D Anyway, I'm glad to see you rebooted the story and continue writing. I'll wait here for the next update! :) |
Heve-chan chapter 2 . 4/26/2015 Okay. I need to point it out again: how the hell do you manage to be so descriptive?! :)) I just love it. Man, I need to practice writing more! :D I'm fired up now! ... but need to extinguish my fire with writing my diploma project... . faanfics will have to wait for now... Back to the story! The morning incident and all the dialogue remembered me of the time in high school when I had sleepovers at my friends house and reading the scene, it felt so natural. Again, I was able to picture it all in my head WITH COLORS! ...doesn't happen too often. And all the scenes in between... I feel like Akira and all the other characters are growing on me... I, I feel like I'm part of them or their family, their world or even feel that I'm them... idk... it happens sometimes. :) I guess I lose the cookie this time. I don't think I know the comedian, but I've read the statement somewhere... or heard it somewhere, I don't know exactly. :D |
Heve-chan chapter 1 . 4/26/2015 Hello! Wow, it's been so long since I talked to you! :D I received your review but I really really wanted to get this off my chest: I am so glad you rebooted the story! I still remember bits and pieces from the original but I now can definitely say I love this one more (I've read all three chapters so let me tell you now, you'll be assaulted by reviews in the next minutes). After not reading this story for so long, I now remember how much I missed it. I am not a big fan of Kurama and KuramaxOC fics but I just love Akira and all her family. I must say, now that I got to the family topic, IT'S HUUUGE! I knew that before and only because I knew that before, I was able to remember them all (the siblings, I mean) but not the whole family (I'm referring to the 3rd chapter here). Nevertheless, they are all adorable and I love how you describe their interactions and not only that, but Kumori and the younger siblings games! ;)) The idea of Kumori telling stories about the boys adventures to little Akane was genius! The actions and everyday things are so well detailed that I can actually picture everything in my mind and the story just plays itself while reading. Isn't it boring sometimes describing everything so well? I must tell you, I get bored by it sometimes. Mostly because I can't wait to go to "the good parts" . :D Now, to the next chapter... |