ok i actually wanted to pause after this chapter cause nothing really happened but after this i will read further for now.

she jinxed it hahaha

yeah my wish is fullfilled no new moon incident

really nice story. but i hope that two will be written as two and not tow somewhen in the future. oh and please DON'T let there be a new moon incident.

This is so hard to read. There’s grammar mistakes everywhere, it’s not even enjoyable. Did you even bother having someone proofread it for you?

tow?maybe two ...and generous?u sure it's not gorgeous? the errors are notable but still a very good story

liking this story!cant put it down!

well congratulations for annoying your readers ... i don't get why authors think that annoying your readers is a good idea ... it only makes me write extremly negative comments ...

yeah ... thanks a bunch for backround info on meaningless sidecharacters that are little more then cannon fodder ... what a waste of a chapter ...

well this is the worst chapter so far ... barely any content for way too many words ... then there are all the vague descriptions ... it's just annoying like hell

It makes sense if a little convoluted but hey we are talking vamps and giant wolves, y not dimensional soul jumps. Not a huge leap of fantasy in terms of thing you know. Im down with that.

Plz for all that is holy dont turn out to be some shitty love triangle. Plz plz dont.

Great story so far. I really really like it.

Serious spelling problems.

your book is amazing! I love oc in book world. and that you not write word for word what Stephanie Meyers wrote. favorite followed and cant wait to read the other book. beautiful.