| Reviews for Training |
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   Shadow-wolf78 chapter 18 . 7/11 Amazing story so far and really well done. Please update soon can't wait to read more and see what happens nice. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2018 ...You...do know he has no family left right? |
| KrazyKad78748 chapter 18 . 10/22/2017 Really good story, but you should stick to one tense so that the writing flows and the story doesn't get confusing. |
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/21/2017 This is amazing, wrote more |
| Blown chapter 18 . 5/19/2017 Omg I can't believe u updated it's been so long |
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/28/2017 Great so far |
| dorfchaosgenie chapter 17 . 1/1/2016 I love it! It is really funny and I want to read more :) give me moooore! Please? |
| LapisAlba chapter 17 . 8/8/2015 Love the story but... Why are there lions in a forest in England? (This is not meant as a spitful question) |
| Guest chapter 17 . 4/29/2015 Love it. |
| Crystaal chapter 17 . 1/1/2015 Lol dude this is really funny and unpredictable... MORE! plz |
| InArduisFidelis-RAMC chapter 12 . 10/9/2014 Not a bad plot and everything but I would recommend checking your tenses. You keep switching between past and present, which is quite distracting. Other than that, this is going really well. |
| jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 1 . 5/20/2014 uh? it s good but a bit confusing! |
| ripper34 chapter 17 . 5/12/2014 Good story |
| MLM24 chapter 17 . 5/12/2014 Good chapter! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2014 haha I'm just imagining how this getting Alex out of school method with a random person would totally not work in today's world. Well that's really sad also... Anyway, is off to a good start. I'm pretty late, I guess seeing as you have 17 chapters already, but I'm looking forward to reading them all right now! |
