bruh if i were naruto i would have kicked Sakura's unloyal ass to the sky and back pff

This is not a "wow thus soooo cute" or "this awesuuummmmmm" comment but I am going to be a bit harsh...ish (well not really a mean comment). Anyways, um - I felt like your fanfic is missing something and it was a bit boring. I'm greatly disappointed about the ending it was really lacking, it seemed rushed too. Also I'm you peft the Sakura but unexplained (one of my pet peeves). You could've added a small perspective of Sakura and Sasuke just to make your fanfic a bit more interesting. But I did like how Naruto (when she waz ranting) was in her character - well kind of, I also liked the perspective of Kurama/Kyuubi.

You left the Sakura bit unexplained.

Depressing, boring, nothing interesting? Did you even think of writing something for the readers to be interested in at all? If not then I can safely say readers will more likely avoid this profile like a plague. If this story is still here I mind as well follow in their footsteps all us readers usually look for potential not the same boring crap we usually run into with hope.. Heh..

Awww! Kyuu is sooo kawaii XD Very well done.

One of the many reasons I hate sakura, her BITCHY attitude and her unbelievable sasuke obsession. I enjoyed this story very much XD 8-D

Hn

awww cute, im not that fond of sasu/naru but this was just too cute!

i loved it

*shakes head* Humans...

Not bad, though kinda confusing.

cute!

the scene in the bedroom when naru forgive him.i felt like something is missin..sorry..but overall your story is good.;)

That was a well written one shot. I love your SasuFemNaru stories; they're well planned out and the characters are in charcter. ;) *Grins* It was a good idea. I loved when you wrote about Kyuubi and his thoughts. Like, about the 'Fo To Al Bum'. ;D

Hope to hear from you soon, and good luck on your stories!

Karishiana

great one-shot. i hope you continue to write stories because you are a great writer