Nice. The ending killed me. XD

Well I loved it however I do not think you'll had more to it since it's been like five years but I not to long ago got into the fandom. I love the idea of both of them together.

Hot maybe ed can wear a maids outfit* thinks yaoi ideas and nosebleeds* well good job only thing why do you say skort not skirt?

were's my cookie :[

Great story but i have read it somewhere else big fan of edvys and, i want my cookie please.

Wooo ~!

Fuck yeah :)

Awesome job!

I think it's funny how you call Envy a 'green-head' I actually had a loooooong talk with my friend when we first figured out Envy's hair was green (note: this was actually not too long ago cuz we read the manga and that's in black'n'white) and we decided to call his hair color "greenette" XD

:3 so sexy I love envy
(and the fact this is sorta incest)
great job the story was great

Maibe: AMAZING! I LOVED IT

Magdalene: Very well written, just watch out for spelling errors.

Maibe: Here bunny, bunny, bunny... (grins fiendishly with the Millennium Rod's dagger unshealthed)

Magdalene: Yami! Don't kill the bunny!

I know you said that their was going to be spelling errors and stuff but I really didn't think that it would be like this! Yes the story was great and stuff but I think that even if you did study on spelling and grammar for the rest of you're life you would'nt be able to learn how to fix up all the mistakes there were. Sorry but if you feel that you suck at writting things, then my question to you would be: THAN WHY WRITE ANYTHING IN THE FIRST PLACE? Sorry if I hurt your feelings, I'm just having a bad day... I want a cookie...

I love the story. Make more please.

o This is meh fav. FMA pairing! AWESOME job! No tell the bunny to give meh a cookie. :3

aws it soo cute! w

Nice story, i love this pairing.

Critic Section:

Lots of spelling errors, but at least i could tell what was going on.

Now i think that i earned a bunny and my cookie.

i rly liked this story. it was really good. _ now get the bunny and give me my hard earned cookie *pouts* XD