Wow, this is kinda unexpected ! But I love the idea of L being Artemis's brother, this is gonna be interesting !

Well Well Well. Very Impressive and also very plausible in every area. I especially like how you made them brothers... In fact I'm going to give a brief summary on how I think their childhood went down.

When L was born he was seen as a gift until his personality developed. After that L became increasingly distant from his father until Artemis Jr. was born who was named after their father in the hopes he would be more acceptable. He became daddy's little boy and thus became L's opposite. Soon Artemis Sr. couldn't stand L anymore so he sent him to Wattari. Artemis Jr. met L afterwards and they became enemies and their battles always ended in a stalemate. Afterwards they ceased contact except when they needed each other. The rest as they say is history.

The idea of L and Artemis being brothers... intriguing. And also believable, since Artemis is almost like a little L, only with neat hair, suits and table manners.
Oh, and chapter 2's description of Matsuda-kun :) I love the guy, but I must admit that it's a fair observation.
Please tell me you haven't abandoned this! (though I won't be angry if you have, as I am slightly guilty of fic-abandonment too)

Oooooh! Ireland, is there more, or did this get abandoned?

You gotta continue this!

aaaaa! no more capters that makes me sad ;.:

but these first few capters are awesome a great bild up. Artemis and L ahaha yeah they would kind of deserve each other

My, my. It's getting quite interesting. Looks like L still doesn't quite trust his little brother.

I like how you made L and Artemis brothers. It adds a little more...zest to their interactions. I also liked how you've linked the shinigami to the fairies as well. However, I think it could go a little deeper. There are a lot of mythology surrounding death gods everywhere round the world. Perhaps you could work in some sort of conflict between the fairies and death gods? Like some sort of myth relating to the history behind the two races?

I also really like your writing style. It's cohesive and expresses emotion well. You add these little details to sentences that make them more meaningful. I especially like that little bit with Watari wanting to spend more time with the kids.

Sorry for the excessively long review. Hope you can update this story soon. I'll be eagerly awiting the next chapter! :)

O_O Keep one writing. No matter what you do, PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

This is amazing please update soon!

This is amazing please update soon!

Great writing. This is great story. You have the characters down perfectly.

Great writing. This is great story. You have the characters down perfectly. Absolutly spectacular. I hope you update soon. I haven't finished reading all the chapters already up of course but I fear I won't be vary patient for more once I have. :)

So keep up the good work.

P.s I take it L is the older brother?

P.S

In responce to:

satrinity

2010-09-29

L could have changed his name, but that doesn't acount for the fact that L is JAPANEZ and the Fowls are IRISH.

Just felt the need to point this out. VERY far fetched for there to be even a distant relation between the two let alone shared parents. Like seriously.

I detect some AU. It was mostly fine until that last word.

"...brother..." :/ that kinda cliched it for me.

*sigh* Ah, well. There aren't many Artemis Fowl Death Note crossovers and most are terrible writing.

You've done a marvoulus job so far. I predict a worthy (and indefinatly incomplete?) fanfiction.

Nicely done.

Hehehehehe... *punch-drunk from just watching Death Note* Amazing. The personality for L is great! Please, keep writing, both of you. I can't wait to see how this twists up the plot.