A terrible place to end it but I know there is a sequel so I won't complain. This is a really good story. Very well done so Thank you.

P.S. - You might already know this: Cote was born in '79 and Michael in '68, so there was only 11 years between them and not around the 20 that you indicated.

So glad you broke up the paragraphs. Loving it so far.

REALLY loved this story! I've already started on the sequel, which I'll review there, but I'm glad this one was already finished, because I'm horribly impatient, grin. This is one of the best I've read, so thank you for taking the time to write, not only a wonderful story, but also one in which the characters are true to themselves.

good fanfic. now, to read the sequel

I've really enjoyed this story and still got two more chapter's to go yes do a sequel.

Oww... Do not end. I hate endings...

That was absolutely amazing. So well written. I love Jacob, he is so adorable.

So good! Please continue either with this one or a sequel!

Why has Eli have to ruin everything for them. He is an evil man. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Beautifully written! Oh no, Eli ordering Ziva's kidnapping. Cliffhanger. Tiva forever.

It's been a great run - a great read - if only one more chapter I'd say you have a loose end to wrap up - fast!

Love the wedding it was beautifully written. I am a little worry about Eli though. I hope they don't hurt Tony,Ziva and the children.

Fantastic! Great writing. Eli trying to ruin the happiness, again. Boo hiss. Tiva forever.

nooooooo, help, I cannot manage a cliffhanger! hopefully I can read more soon :)

Loooooooooove this story. Even though i am not so convinced that Jacob needs a cochlear implant... but that's an other story...
Maybe you could add also tali to th story. Would looove that! Or maybe in a sequel... don't want to miss these characters, too :)

Definitely a sequel.