Reviews for Lost and Fumbling
MiuraWtr chapter 9 . 7/16
I already planning to write some nice comments like... great.! I search for this kind of fic. And it 's avaiable alot in Fullmetal fandom but in Naruto? it's quite rare. Moreover in this pairing.

and then came to the end of story... what the?!
Guest chapter 9 . 6/18
The end was nice, it made me smile.. after crying over almost every chapter. Thanks for this story 3
Vinyr chapter 9 . 6/8
What the hell!? I did not see that coming! Good Story though!
Guest chapter 9 . 2/4
Idk wheather to hate or love u rn
Wicked.Onna chapter 9 . 1/6
Oh thank all the fluffy gods that shikamaru is not dead thank you for that brilliant story absolutely heart-wrenching but lovely all the same
Wicked.Onna chapter 1 . 1/6
Okay my only complaint about this whole thing is that you killed shikamaru how could you otherwise absolutely brilliant beginning to a story
Daiki Aomine chapter 9 . 10/16/2019
Hahaha! I did NOT see that coming! Good job!
failedssaeng chapter 9 . 6/17/2019
I never feel so happy to read this kind of ending
muttjc2003 chapter 9 . 3/4/2019
This was great! You did an amazing job. :D
nekolovesyou chapter 9 . 8/25/2018
Ya know when I first read this i was mad that all of it was a dream but also happy that it was just a dream
nekolovesyou chapter 9 . 3/7/2018
I totally did not see this comming. great job!
Nashi-ossu chapter 9 . 7/26/2017
I was scared shitless when you mentioned that Kakashi forgot of Naruto! Jeez!
It's awesome! 3
thecartoongirl22 chapter 9 . 5/29/2017
God damn! My Heat just took a beating! It was heatbroken and sorrow and sadness the BAM! I was laughing?!
Laialy chapter 7 . 5/7/2017
Noooooooooo Iruka sensei ;-;
Laialy chapter 5 . 5/7/2017
POOR NARUTO THIS IS SO SAD YET IM STILL READING WHAT IS THIS SORCERY
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