this was also another amazing story. i dont know how you do it... i would love a sequel but only if your up for it. i usually write more but i have to get off the computer so i guess ill just say great job on the story! (lame, i know.)

Very good story you left it where you can have a sequel. Like what happens with the move, J and N! Now hunter thought for sure he and Melissa would end up together!

I am fearful that her feeling will change for hunter now that he's immortal of jake is really going to be jealous now

Not sure how I am going to like him as a vampire.

I am starting to agree with Jake, I don't know if I trust this Hunter guy eihter

I think that the pull of the imprint will be the driving force of finding Ness. Jacob should have trusted his instincts more.

I think that the jacket was a way to deter the cullens through them off track

I have the feeling that they are after all of these hybrids for breeding purposes

Her feeling are changing and I think she is getting uncomfortable.

Enjoying the story so far. You have creepy characters that seem iffy and after this chapter I am thinking that Hunter is decent but not so sure about whose in the car

I have a weird feeling as well

I don't trust this dave guy. Especially after the last line about Ness will be mine.

So I'm guessing he lives at the cullens and not laPush. Surprised that they have stuck around forks for all that time.

This appears to be very soft and melancholy. You don't find very many 3rd POV's

i hought it was good. well done. i would have changed somethings but it your story. write a second one i wanna readit