This a nice story!

It is very good!

I think it was good! :D

This is really good!

Please add another chapter! Please! I love this story! But you should probably rate it M for all that blood... I must say, when you mentioned "a near-death experience", I expected blood (lots of it) but not quite this much. Not meant in a negative sense, I love this story 100%!

Its not bad i love it even though ace(my fav character) is getting hurt mayb not some much detail on the injuries :)

I agree with you Ace is the best character, i wish they would highlight him more...

is this only one chapter! ! Oh well, nice story!

I love at the end how you say Good or bad, and forget brilliant, because that is what this story is. The description is excellent, and you make the reader feel sympathy toward Ace, which I believe is difficult to do with someone like him. Baron's POV is ammusing and I think how you show Mira's emotions are very well done.

All in all, brilliant 5*s

Aw! I love it! LOL Baron's 'Finally' was what I was thinking!

I love the flash backs it gives it a good feel i know what you mean by puting your fave character through stress i can list so many ways tho sometimes they die... anyway keep up the good work!

please make a sequel

that was good lol at the end

Love it! you should make more romantic stories! please and thank u!

Lol do u think that barron knew just a tiny bit ? Lol