great story. Doesn't need improvement.

I love the story, it was well devloped and written, Great work!

That was an intense read. You captured the scenarios and emotions of a prison setting perfectly. Fantastic job.

Remy & ROMY forever!

i love this history!

u have to keep writing about northstar and iceman specially! LOL

Sorry my english!

i'm just learning! LOL

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it! Good job!

Loved it!

This story was wonderfully written and was the perfect length. Although i thought you could've given more detail to the end part. Your story followed through to the end and didnt leave readers impatient because there wasnt enough of the story. It was also really well written. Each of the characters were written wonderfully. i loved it! ps. i don't know that much about the x-men but i recently fell in love with them. is bobby really gay? the whole petrizzo twist was really wel done and added some intrigue to the mix. good work!

What a great ending. You tied up all the loose ends so nicely. And I cannot lie, Ororo and Logan admitting that they love each other was so sweet. I'm so sad to see this story end, but so happy to see it completed and so perfectly. ]

~Chica~

Very nice chapter. I love the wrap up after the tension of the last chapter. You rock as a story teller. I can't wait for the next epilogue and hopefully a sequel that explores the next stage of their thriving and surviving.

So the plan went off without a hitch, yay! I really felt the tension of the men and women being separated. Especially after finding out that Ororo is pregnant. I didn't even guess that the condoms would be bunk in the earlier chapter, and when the news about Ororo was revealed I still didn't suspect foul play. That was a great twist.

Bobby's dillemma was hella heavy. Although I am a bit curious how it would have played out I feel his relief that they were rescued. He is so lucky, and for that matter so is everyone else.

Why did Ororo and Logan choose to go door to door as opposed to calling a gathering to tell the news? Will the rest of the team ever find out about what Bobby knew?

I must say that I missed Bobby as partial narrator. I'm so happy to see that there will be at least one more chapter of this.

Man. What a crazy awesome chapter. The X-Men were all saved. Warren and Betsy were magnificent. They really pulled through. Carly too. Such a great chapter! Update soon!

~Chica~

I like that you were able to capture all the feelings of each couple and you even managed to make me feel sorry for Bishop so kudos to you. I hope that in battling Sinister that the team is able to find at least one collar for Rogue because the thought of saran wrap and gel is just a little too messy for me to have to condemn Rogue and Remy too:)

I like how the female X-Men came to bust the guys out of prison. I'm also glad you're writing another X-Men story, you're so great at it.

i really can't wait for the epilogue. hope it comes soon. your story is so totally weird but in a good way.

Oh my gosh! This chapter was so freaken kicka*s. I loved it. Honestly, it was so exciting to read. Warren and Betsy and Carly freaken rocked it all! They were so good. And the X-Women, oh man they were cool. They're free...but I wonder what this all means. I'm all hyped up now. Do update soon please!

~Chica~