Fantastic!

Great story! Absolutely adorable! I'm off to read the sequel.

LOOVEE the stooryy, excellent, magnificently brilliant! thnks sooo muchh!

i love this story so much *_* 3

OMGosh, that was wonderful!1

:)

ba dum dum dum da.. im lovin' it

:D i am inlove with this! i don't want it to end

so jealous of shay right now!

you are a great writer! can't wait to read more

xxx

omg. i AM FREAKING IN LOVE WITH SETH STORIES. ESP. YOURS. I LOVE YOUR CHAPTERS. THEY ARE PERFECT. LONG ANF FILLED WITH DETAILS AND DRAMA. IM OBSESSED WITH THIS STORY BUT ITS LIKE 1 AM AND I NEED TO GETT OFF DA COMPUTER AND BACK TO SLEEP. :)

I'm a sucker for imprint stories and Seth is one of my favorite wolves, so thank you for writing a imprint fic with him.

I wanted to offer a couple of tips, but keep in mind that I have only read chapter one, so I don't know if any of this was addressed later in the fic.

The only thing I saw in chapter one that were grammatical errors was that you used the wrong tense occasionally when you wrote from Seth's POV. For instance: "I glare at her but don't respond." Should be "I GLARED at her but DIDN'T respond." For the most part you wrote in correct tense, but I would recommend going back and rereading to make sure you caught all the mistakes.

On a writing style level, I would advise against switching POV in the middle of a chapter. You also seem to fall into the trap that a lot of fanfic authors fall into when trying to tell a story from more than one POV. You don't have to write every event from both POVs. I agree that the imprint moment is important enough to warrant being told from each person, but I hope as I continue reading the fic that every event isn't going to be told from both sides. That would easily get boring and repetitive.

Again, I'm only to the first chapter. I do plan to keep reading, but those were just two things that popped out at me.

i reallly love this story, but you grammer and spelling could improve.

seth was being a bit of a drama queen;;when he fell on the ground:P haha i like this story tho(:

(: Seth is a beast lol (no pun intended) keep writing about him your super good at it!

Love the story! I can't resit any imprinting stories! I love how it shows the imprinting through the eyes of the imprintee. Awesome awesome awesome story!

I really liked this and I was just hoping that you could maybe write a story on how Kendra's taking everything when Collin imprints on her, cuz it was really interesting. Or maybe you could write a Jared and Kim story that would be awesome too!

this was an amazing story. u did a great job!