I wish this story wasn't dead

It is a pretty good story, it is a pity that you could not continue it, it is wonderful, greetings, see you, bye!

You've lost me here, you need to explain things more instead of leaving it as a mystery.

While i like the story you constantly have naruto refer to fem sasuke as satsuki and sasuke, like you forget that naruto doesn’t know that he is actually a she

female Sasuke hmm? my favorite version of this pairing has always been a yandere femSasuke, or at least a possessive one. can't wait to start reading

try reading the bible , it is a better story of truth as you can see certainly this story you have produced is a twisted teaching of a lie ,,, HALLELEUYAH ! ! ! !

So your Naruto is a little bitch where's his pimp

it does NOT take 10 minutes to make ramen xD
it takes 3 minutes l0l

Nooooooooo! I NEED MORE! This story has the best plot I have ever read and I would LOVE to read more, so please if you read this continue writing this story. It doesn't matter what are expectations are, what matters is the LIFE you put into this story, the heart and soul you put in is what makes the story great. It's what makes us want to continue to read this story and for when you stop writing, to beat the crap out of you till you start writing again.(like now)

please continueeee

superb

Damn! You're story's Amazing!

One of the best fanfics i've read... I wish you will continue this until its end :)
I love the plot

TheLoneWolfShugo0564

I honestly can't decide if this fanfic is depressing or kinda cool... guess it doesn't matter, seeing as it's abandoned.

Crap... is this gonna go all Grimdark? I hate grimdark...

This fic is really good. It's creative, dark, and makes Naruto stand out in a great way. Good job. Just try not to make long paragraphs of explanations, instead make them short and simple. It makes the story more interesting if you can manipulate the information around the characters and events.