| Reviews for Heartbeat |
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   nonactivesorry chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 I always come back to read this because it's just so good. Willabeth (and Korlando) forever! |
| Motek chapter 3 . 1/26/2013 I've just started reading your story and when multi-chapter story is complete I tent to comment the whole story after the final chapter but here with this I have the sudden urge to announce that it totally absolutely took me! The idea is... I don't know, it's so unique, I don't think I'm gonna go to bed today before I finish the whole thing. And may I just add I totally love your disclaimer, it made me laugh really hard! |
| XMissxHallawayX chapter 18 . 4/26/2012 Oh, my god. I love this story! Pnina Tornai is a Kleinfeld's exclusive. I love that you threw that in. Jack is always a good laugh. Is he the best man? |
| Alexzander95 chapter 22 . 4/4/2012 Amazing story, I really enjoyed and glad I found it. I wish you luck in case you right more stories in the future. Once again thank you. Sincerely Alexzander95 |
| Alexzander95 chapter 22 . 4/4/2012 Amazing story, I really enjoyed and glad I found it. I wish you luck in case you right more stories in the future. Once again thank you. Sincerely Alexzander95 |
| bonesncisfreak chapter 1 . 8/20/2011 ok I read the whole thing and loved please continue the story about when they have kids that would be awesome k thanks |
| ShunKickShunKers chapter 22 . 7/8/2011 Nice story :3 Thank you for writing it :D |
| ShunKickShunKers chapter 9 . 7/8/2011 Outch, father Swan is showing up. *Off to read the next chapter* |
| ShunKickShunKers chapter 4 . 7/8/2011 My, my, I wasn't sure about what to expect when I started reading this, but now I'm hooked :D As a fan of AU's, I 'd say you did this one real good :D I mean, you kept the main lines of the original story, the character's aren't too OOC and you even managed to keep JACK in xDD! Will be other reviews on the way :3 |
| Lunita chapter 22 . 5/30/2011 OMG! I loved the story that you wrote. The style of writing that you have makes it very easy for the reader to transition from pov to the next. Honestly, this is one of the better modern AU that I have read in a long time. Thank you so much! And continue writing. Your talent is a gift. |
| juli 8D1819 chapter 22 . 5/22/2011 a beautiful love story |
| Ilovethisstory chapter 10 . 5/22/2011 Hi! I really love this story! I'm just really confused...Isn't Will still Davy Jones? So isn't he only supposed to be on land one day every ten years? |
| LittleMissDreamer7 chapter 22 . 1/8/2011 Wow this was amazing! I loved it! Deffienetly the best fanfic with Elizabeth and Will. *sniff sniff* It was so BEAUTIFUL! Hehehee sorry I am a little crazy |
| Willabet chapter 1 . 12/25/2010 i dont like this story. why did you have to change the story? victoria instead of elizabeth? smh |
| Willabeth chapter 1 . 12/25/2010 What the fuck? victoria? this is lame! |
