| Reviews for Tears Have Fallen |
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itachi is mine chapter 5 . 4/19/2014 It's Uzumaki love! |
Random chapter 1 . 9/25/2012 Good start, I like it |
Phenitial chapter 5 . 1/17/2011 I thought that it was a really great story and pretty dead on about the characters and how they would have acted if such a situation ever occurred. |
Hafous chapter 1 . 10/4/2009 OMG! continue it please T.T coz it's just to sad, I really loved it :D keep it up |
quintupledots915 chapter 5 . 8/15/2009 I really liked the story! The grammar and punctuation was a bit off , and it was kinda hard to understand some parts of the story. I have realized that when there is a story when those things are present, the story line is really good. That doesn't mean you shouldn't try to put more effort on making the story make sense! Keep up the good work on all of your stories! |
Rayquazaq chapter 5 . 8/15/2009 Very good storyline. Very good story indeed,you just need to check some spelling errors,like "Coarse" to "Course",but other than that,its quite good. By the way,isnt Narutos last name Uzumaki,so no one knew he was related to Namikaze Minato?I thought he had his moms last name. |
Starfire99 chapter 5 . 8/14/2009 Thank you for coming to your senses. You will always have at least one jerkoff who just wants to be a jerkoff. Now here's my reviews. And it will be critical because there's something with the story I found wrong. Naruto begins with forgiving Sakura WAY too easily. Even if she was drunk, what she said was WAY over the line and I don't see Naruto going as far as he did if he wasn't damn sure of himself. And why would Kyuubi be helping him? I'd think a demon would be egging him on to leave. And if you were going to have that scene where Sakura and Sasuke kiss, you put it at the wrong point. Sakura is desperately trying to find Naruto, yet she decides she has time to go suck face with Sasuke when she is told Naruto is only 13 miles away. It doesn't make a lot of sense. If she was so desperate to find Naruto that she tore off out of the village as soon as she found the note and went to Tsunade to tell her she was going, I don't see her stopping for anything. Plus, why would she believe Sasuke about Naruto being on a mission? If he was, wouldn't Tsunade have told her that instead of offering a team to retrieve him? |
Gravenimage chapter 5 . 8/14/2009 Great chapter update soon. |
Sasuke Rules All of You chapter 4 . 8/2/2009 First off, the review that set you off wasn't that bad he or she was just being honest. And two this story has just gotten juvenile with the reactions of Naruto to the things Sakura has said and done. I mean it's like they're 12yrs old and married. Where's the anger, hurt, and betrayal Naruto should be feeling after seeing his wife kissing the one guy he has always been worried about. I mean to have him all concerned about Sakura after just witnessing what he had, come on get real. You would be better off to go back edit and rewrite this. Because as it is right now, this story is just laughable. |
Strawberry Raindrops chapter 4 . 8/2/2009 Really, that review wasn't really out of line - just a little harsh, maybe. The review was just trying to give you constructive criticism too. You really should take the critiques the people give into consideration and thought. Anyhow, I'm glad you're continuing this. :) |
Starfire99 chapter 4 . 8/1/2009 You had maybe one person with a comment that was out of line. The rest of them were constructive criticisms. If you can't take constructive criticism, then you shouldn't be writing at all. I think you just used it as an excuse to abandon a story. |
F.Y.I chapter 1 . 6/30/2009 Simplistic at best. I have to wonder if you even read any of this as you were typing. You state in chapter one that Naruto had spoken with Tsunade about the divorce yet in chapter two she has no idea what happened. Giant plot hole right there. Spelling, grammer and punctuation all need work as well. Put more effort into description instead of dialog. There is no balance to it. All in all, this needs a massive overhaul. Take a breather, look at some other fictions to see what makes them do so well and try again. |
Gravenimage chapter 3 . 6/29/2009 Great chapter update soon. |
The King of Literature chapter 2 . 6/25/2009 Make the next one a lemon |
skyhigh18 chapter 2 . 6/16/2009 Man, after those things Sakura said to Naruto, you had him forgive Sakura FAR too quickly. Good grief...and why is that Naruto is acting like it's his fault? |