It's alright. My only issue is maybe the word choice; the lack of contractions makes the dialogue a little hard to stomach. Maybe it's a stylistic choice but things sound kind of weird and overdramatic or robotic

If I were her I would've just kept cutting over the scar until it wasn't recognizable and try to fucking murder the bastard. I honestly don't get how she isn't completely livid.

Nice..whats next

Even though its been 7 years CAN U PLEASE KEEP GOING WITH THIS STORY ITS GOOD AND I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW THE END. PLEASE AND THANK YOU

A bit mysoginistic, saskue could should show more of a vulnerable side at the end because he is unsure of himself

On a scale of 1/10 on how much Sakura wanted to bitch slap Sasuke, I'd say a 11. How dare he leave her their tied up and cold... (emojis tho)

-IShipAnimePeeps

PUT MORE SASUKE RAPE SAKURA WITH FOURCE! in 1 episode atleast 4 or 3 rapes!

I liked it..I was hoping sasuke saw sakura &naruto kissing

omgoodness u read my mind,and saw it this statement from her in that cave :When she said I gett any man to fluk me and sasuke was pisstoff..fin2 return to story I had to come and tell u I love the way you think

It would have been hilarious if someone saw them xD but hmmm overall Sasuke still has closed his feelings, i had hoped he would finally explain why he keeps coming back for her. The writing was good but i had hoped for some development in their relatsionship besides the lust :)

Damn it, Sasuke keeps running away xD

I have read so many fics that im not even sure if i have read this one before :P hahh Sasuke was an ass at the end xD

Sasuke sometimes u can be such an ass hole

that was adorable

Though out the 'book' many spelling errors other wise very good