| Reviews for One afternoon |
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kyuki619 chapter 1 . 7/16 LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH! |
warzonecall chapter 1 . 6/12 Very but very sweet and romantic on how she wanted to love to the next level. Eriol sure is a real gentleman but a good convince got to him hot. Also congrats on this! |
woofyy chapter 1 . 6/7/2018 Nice story. It's nice to see Eriol be so responsible and a gentleman but it's also nice to see him finally agreeing to make love Tomoyo. Good luck with your future stories. |
RiverLake chapter 1 . 6/19/2013 ngaw i like...:P |
Tommy-yomz chapter 1 . 1/26/2011 Eriol is very sweet. I hope all guys are like that, gentleman and not talking about sex. Hmmp! Anyways, cute story from the beginning up to the ending... |
CrazyCutePeanut chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 ROTFLOL! I love how funny and interested Sakura's friends are with what SxS 'did' before. "I wanna know all the details!" I feel kinda bad for Eriol. I could sense that he really didn't want to do it. And even at the end of the story, I knew he was dying to take it back. It was a great story, all in all. 4 stars if this thing had a ranking. LOL! |
Blood Never Lies chapter 1 . 7/4/2010 This was a very good read; very funny, tender and moving. The characterisation was excellent, especially Eriol. The story well thought out and easy to read. I thoroughly enjoyed it. My sincere congragulations on an excellent story. |
MariaSabaku chapter 1 . 6/5/2010 This is your first ever M rated fic? Really? LOL! You did really good! I would've never thought that it was your first one. Don't worry I was blushing like crazy by the end too. ;] |
Bladre MKT chapter 1 . 5/14/2010 awwwww soon darn cute and funny at the end! XP |
WaTaNaBeSaWa chapter 1 . 3/7/2010 KYA! So cute, so hot, so...OMG! Your story is amazing. I loved it. I loved the way you wrotr your story. Keep on writing goodies like that ;) |
tangerinelove chapter 1 . 2/27/2010 OH MY GOSH! HOT, HOT, HOT! HAHA. I LOVE IT. WAY TO GO TOMOYO, HELPING ERIOL LOSE CONTROL. *SNICKERS* |
mindset chapter 1 . 10/25/2009 I love 3 |
Mizutina chapter 1 . 9/8/2009 That was awesome and really well done and I like it alot *blush* hehehehe |
Blue-Sapphire1 chapter 1 . 7/25/2009 haha..;p g0od one |
NaiJW chapter 1 . 6/23/2009 Aw hwat a nice and funny story, love the use of english. Well done! May I ask, you kinda used twilight scene in this havent ya? I cudnt hep but notice it _ That scene in twilight is my fave! -OLA |