so u gonna update this or...?

Guest chapter 1 . Sep 1
There is nothing worse than a person who learned a few words of a language and mix it into their own. Either write in japanese or in english. Don't mix them together.

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To whoever wrote this cowardly criticism, I say to you, F*CK OFF! This is my work and I didn't invite you to read it. If you have a problem with the way I wrote my fanfiction, then, by all means, don't read it and find some other fanfic writers that suit your preference (Those who don't mix languages. Those who either write in English only or Japanese only.) There's nothing worse than an anonymous asshole like you who leave reviews like this and think their way of reading and writing fanfiction is the 'proper' or 'correct' way. GET OFF YOUR FREAKING HIGH HORSE. I didn't learn Japanese, I AM a Japanese native speaker and English is my second language. I'm not a WEABO like you. As for mixing languages, you are obviously as ignorant as they come. Different languages, both written and spoken, have been borrowing words from one another and incorporating them into their vocabularies and lexicons for centuries through language contact and mixing. Apparently, you didn't study linguistics because you don't know what you're talking about. So don't go DICTATING your 'writing policy' on my stories. Take your Nazi purist attitude and shove it up your arse! ありがとうございました。あなたはバカだね。
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GG-in-Paradise

Ahhh, I really enjoyed reading this cute story! It was so precious and comical. I also liked the way you wrote the characters. :D

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tienes que continuar con esta gran historia

I read all the GinTae fanfics that I find, so I hope you make some more. :). Nice story! :)

I love this pairing! gintae 4ever!

So is this story complete or will you continue?

Cool chapter

Poor Gintoki! Going through all this for Otae.

Hilarious

Thank you so much for updating this fanfic. You are very talented and seem to understand Gintama's characters very well. I really love this entire fanfic. Now I really want to see this animated some day. It's very rare to see this side Otae anyway. But I love the way you wrote her. But I gotta say, that must have been one hell of a hangover.

So, is it really the end? I mean, I would love to see more of these two in this setting. It just seems so right. I really hope there are more to come for these. You can throw in some more of Kondo or Sachhan for some interesting scenario. It would be really fun to watch their reactions to these recent developments between Gintoki and Otae. Because, after this incident, I doubt they will be the same anymore. They went through massive character development in this fanfic. So I would really like what would happen next. How would this little incident affect their daily lives and future interactions?

Keep up the good work! Oh and your occasional usage of japanese is absolutely amazing. It just gives that great Gintama vibe and I can literally imagine them saying those. All the best for future! Keep updating. Love your work :)

Finally! I love you for this update!

Thank you soooo much for updating! I hope this is not the end I love this fanfic

lol! that was great.

Noooooooooooo!
Please do not end it!
This is really good.
:);)

I really enjoy your writing :)
I just recently started reading this fanfic and it has already become one of my favorites. I can so clearly picture this entire story. I really wish this was animated. Please keep up the good work. I will be waiting for your next update :)