Oh, poor Sev...

I really enjoyed reading this, because it kind of fits with my own 'personal' canon Snape. I've always felt there would have been moments in Snape's life, little sweet, foreboding moments, that he keeps looking back on, that he can't let go. I loved it - it completely breaks and warms my heart.

No con-crit. Awesomeballs!

(Oh, and chock loads of love for the review - it made my day.)

Yeah, when she has nightmares she wants Sev. When she wants a dream life with the perfect jock, she forgets _her_ promise.

Just like everybody always forgets their promises to Snape.

Aw... so sad! Sweet - but sad. I know that in the end it couldn't save their relationship, but I do wonder if they remembered this incident.

aw...very sweet and nicely written! Well Done!

:-P

cute i'm working on my own Lily Severus story called dark desire the story starts off on there last day of 6th year at hogworts and goes though their laster year at hogworts then into their adult life and what happens there please read it after i post it