Hey Loinfruit!

This was really hot! You've got a great story here and I almost didn't finish reading it (I'm not sure if you're aware, but ALL of your apostrophes and quotation marks are missing! What' happened? Maybe you posted in the wrong format.)however, I was drawn iun by your wonderful banter and description and overlooked what probably wasn't your fault (the missing marks) and loved this story. First, I love the premise, and that episode was always great, you just made it better.

You did a great job with the prompt, especially with Luke and Lorelai hooking up. Gotta love the fripples! Bwahaha! Excellent job, let me know if you ever find out about the missing punctuation.

Great job,

Lukey

Great story! I loved how it was Emily's comments that prompted Lorelai to make the first move with Luke. And the scene on Lorelai's porch was very hot and wonderful. ;) Loved the part about Lorelai and Emily at the end too.