huh...seems you have the chapter printed twice here. Just thought you should know. Nice start though

just to cute Hiei! love it!

Why is there two of well, your whole chapter? It's kinda confusing.I like the story so far, but again it's confusing.

Awwwwwwwww! Good job!

I did not finish this because I cant get over the fact that you seem to be claiming okami (as in your oc's name and her brothers name you did not come up with) thats copyright infringement unless you disclaim the okami content. You seriously couldn't come up with a better name so you stole the ones from okami? Lol I like what I've read from you and I don't want to see your account removed from ffdn that's why I wrote this

And once again, I'm cryin like a baby :) Thank you. For writing these stories and bein so good at it :)

Such a cute ending. :)

How much time has past, its kind of hard to tell.

Oh cute and discusting :)

Love the bookstore angle, was going to ask why he was there but yeah Kurama so it made sence. I also didn't know that Kurama was the name of a mountain is that ture or did you make it up ether way I love the story so far. _

I like it and i personally love how you ended it. I also think an awkward Hiei is cute hehe. Anyway I enjoyed reading the story. Thank you for writing it.

i loved it and sorry for not reviewing sooner, computer problems! it was really good!

I love this ending! XD

Aww, how Kawaii!xD I nearly squealed! More soon please!3

Aw...I started crying! So they're gonna get married and have babies right? Great job! ;)