Just started reading this, and I felt the urge to write a review for once in my life, not that there will be any onlookers. The work you have here is by no means good, it’s flow is janky at the best of times, the dialogue can get confusing, it’s always a daze to keep track of perspective changes, and most every word feels the tiniest bit dull and out of place, like a tilted painting.

That being said, while this work lacks heavily in technical writing, it conveys emotion far better than most works. It’s odd that even though I felt a sort of dazed disconnection from the story while reading it, I can’t help but appreciate it’s emotion despite honestly having a headache from some sentences, being a stickler for those sorts of fancier writings.

This is by no means a good work. But honestly, I loved reading this, it’s flaws making it stand out more than other works. And, the author should be proud that they were able to convey emotions despite the work’s weird formatting, disjointed feel, and otherwise.

I don't know if you intended to do so but when remila took reimu's first kiss it reminded me of when Dio took Erina's first kiss they both are vampires after all

Hello I finish this history recently and while it din't make me cry is one of the best histories I have read of all times exepcional writing with some small errors here and there, great character development, and a plot that keep me intrested since chapter one by far the best Touhou fanfic I have read sir you have my favorite. and I notice the lack of reviews for this history for that I assume not all readers of this page expect this type of long history, mostly humor if it's long to keep them constant but it's a excelent job I hope to see more of your works.

Regards from Chile.

Well, this was something beautiful. At first I was sceptical of this, I don't exactly fair well with long stories, but I was dragged in by the summary. At first I deemed the story all right if a bit slow, with the characters being portrayed well. About at chapter 15 I gave up, growing bored. But I soon picked it up again, and didn't stop reading until the end. And the ending, my god, this is the only story I ever read to make me openly cry, hell even as I right this I'm still tearing up a bit over everything that happened. I both adored and hated the final battle, and how you wrote Yukari's decent into complete madness and Reimu being forced to kill her, perfectly executed.
A part of me doesn't want to read this again, because of how emotionally cruel it becomes. I say, you did an unbelievably great job, and this won't go down as my favourite Fanfiction, but as my favourite story of all time, for I couldn't find anything as powerful and moving as this one.

Sob I'm actually crying sob you sir are brilliant.

I thought youka cannot die

Bravo... It was good. I know that my comment is short but I would just like to say that was one of the best stories I have ever read. From the first chapter to the forty-fourth it was one heck of a story. I hope in the future you make more of these. -Sir Bears

Wow, this is a fantastic story

Well, and so it ends, just to begin again.

Well, looks like she will be back, but will she still be human or... what?

Well, is not like one would believe she would go to hell, not after all the good she did, right?

Well, there are after all limits to humans, even for heroes and chosen ones...

Dammit Yukari, why? Why you had to do this?

Well, you two have dragged this too long...

Well, no one wins every time... right?