Bella calling Edward on being a control freak was priceless!

ahaha calling Edward a grandma kills me

Leaving a comment from another account, just because I love your writing so much, and I will never let go of this story! Lots of love!

A masterful piece of writing, draws you in with just enough tension and excitement to keep you from ever wanting to put it down. A pleasure to read. Thank you for writing, even if it is unfinished, it’s still a delight.

I only just found this story for the first time and I have spent the last week laughing, blushing, crying and nervous as I spent every spar moment reading it! So sad it's unfinished, but a girl can dream it one day might be completed. I take my hat off to you

poor marcus
also, comparing chelsea to voldemort was too good

Bella is playing the game with aplomb

We all need a Dr. George to guide us :)

Wow that was one action packed chapter. Awesome reading!

Sex tips from Renee? Simply terrifying haha

I’ve read through this story so many times, and keep hoping it will be updated and completed, but here we are over 7 years since the last update, so will this be one of the sad forever incomplete stories?

This story is beautiful. My heart is broken knowing it will probably never be finished. Well done.

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Absolutely the finest of twi fiction. Well written, great character development.
Marvelous, novel novel.

Beautifully written. A plus for me, I am a 69 year old woman and you have introduced to a sensual, delicate experience of loving. I truly thank you.