serina-phantom...you just had to go and do that to me. Have some of The Swan Princess in Chapter 17: Trial of the Afterlife Part 4. Now I'm hoping you start up a paper story I'd call 'The Swan Prince', I bet you'd be able to do it really good! So hopefully, if you decide to type it down, I'll be one of the ones to read it! :)

I think you should do the second one

This was very sweet to read. With the way the characters were here, you had just deepened my liking for tendershipping in a good way. I've noticed that a couple of elements you used here was also used in one of my other favorite fanfics from you, "The Swan Prince" with spiritshipping but I still enjoyed reading this. Amazing job!

Misty "*Throws a pie at Ra's face* Yes! I finally did it!"
Rain "...Did you just throw a pie at a god's face?"
Misty "Yes and enjoyed every second of it."
Rain "When you die remind me never to feed you sugar."
Misty "*Skips around singing "I'm a pony!*"
Rain "*Groans* Oh Ra... Anyway, the first of the chapter reminded me of Tsubasa Chronicles, so I just had to listen to ship of fools."
Misty "Shut up! Nobody cares! Nobody!"
Rain "...Yeah, so um... Before this girl gets into sugar depressed mode see you later?..."
Misty "Nobody!"
Rain "Oh shut up and cry Anubis a river!"
Misty "Nah don't won't to get mummified today..."
Rain "Just... Just go away now."
Misty "Fine be that way! *Storms off*"
Rain "Oh thank Ra..."
Misty "Oh and I found your stash of candy again! Ha-ha I get more candy now!"
Rain "Oh for the love of Isis!"
Misty "Ha-ha-ha!"

jeez something about being cute and innocent makes fangirls want to hurt you RUN YUGI RUN cool story i like it

Wow, this story is really good so far. I am very interested to see what is going to happen to Yugi, Yami, Ryou, and Bakura. I am even more interested because they are also my four favorite characters and the people I love to read about the most.

Your writing is very good and I enjoyed how it flowed. It was not choppy like some that I have read and the idea is something I have not even come across yet so I am looking forward to see what happens next! Great job!

yay happy ending *claps and look like a baby*

Someone watched The Swan Princess when they wrote this chapter. ;)

Maye: ohh! Do the Avatar one plz! :) :) and the alice in wonderland :) :)

Dancer: I like the Avatar one, sounds so sweet :) (For Bakura/Ryou Malik/marik and Yugi/Yami, blah Pegascus!)

In three... two... one...
Everyone: HALLEJUIAH! HALLELJUIAH!
Madaya: Wo!1
Bakura: An actual story that was actually finished... Hallelujiah...
Ryou: Yes! THey won!
AtemYami: YES! AIBOUS SAFE! AND WE ARE ALL TOGETHER!
Yugi: Yahoo!
Madaya: And I'm VERY interested in Bakura's body...
Bakura: (suggestively) Oh... (grins)
Madaya: Not THAT way!
Bakura: *laughs*
Madaya: So I will read that!
Thanks for this amazing book you wrote! I Loved loved loved it!

lol! the gods were betting on the winner (shakes head still laughing) o that was good that was really good!

read ya later!

so fantastic and well written

i loved this story and was sad but happy to see it end. wonderful job serina-phantom. i like the last two In a World of My Own and Yugi's Adventures in Wonderland. they sound cool lol.

yay~ It finished with a cute ending! I vote for the first one by the way :D

That was good. I'm glad they're back safe. The thought of gods betting is funny. Great story!