You have such interesting ideas!

The ending was beautiful. You discarded Tom a little too easily, I think, but hey, the fic needed to end a way or another, so nevermind I guess.
What I like about this fic, in comparison to how you often write TenMar, is that all the characters had moved past a lot of their angst, therefore all of them had already grown a lot from the beginning, so I really felt a sort of closure from everyone in the end. I liked having the girls sort it out and talk in an almost friendly manner. I like that you have shown Rose's growth too.
I guess I just don't understand the Doctor's feelings as well as the others, which is my nitpick. It just seemed to me like his being well over Rose made perfect sense, but his coming together with Martha not as much. I don't mean to say he was out of character but something that makes your way to write TenMar fictions painfully realistic is that they all have a trigger to sort of make the Doctor admit that he can love Martha, that he just won't. I didn't see that here besides this "I saw the light" out of the blue realization.
That said, I really love this fic, not as much as others like Escape from me, Cast off, The Choice of Earth, etc. I think some of your fics display your talent for writing intricate, thick, brilliant plots better and the others display how well and inside-out you know these characters. And sometimes you come up with fics that do both so well (Mysteries of Ward 40, nuff said.)
I think this one is more plot-driven. And I hope you don't mind me saying but you seem to love working with alternate realities of many kinds. You just love it when universes collapse, don't you? :D
Every one of your fics make my Martha Jones' fan's heart jump with glee. Thanks a lot.

Hurray, the Doctor is back.

Rose is sleeping with the Master despite all things because of some void stuff that makes them irremediably attracted to one another...Gross. I don't even like her but this is still terrible.

Wow. That was a lot of information thrown in. Always these bloody Daleks though. Never quite extinct those things. So it's up to Martha to save the day because she's the only one who remembers, ironic that this is literally how Amy saved the Doctor in "The Big Bang"...but you did it before Moffat :D.

I can't wait to see how Martha will pull this off.

It gets better with every chapter.

Your original adventures for Martha and the Doctor are too awesome for words.

That was really good. The Doctor better make sure he treats Martha right cause I have a feeling that Raj will be keeping an eye on him.

Absolutely LOVED it!

Your portrayal of the Master is absolutely spot-on! Perfect!

Is the Raj character patterned after Raj from MI6? And did I mention I REALLY love this fic!

First of all, this story is genius! I love it! Second, it took me a while to figure out where you came up with 'Ellis' and why that name was familiar. Very clever using his real last name. Anyway, I'll probably try and read straight through to the end-all 21 chapters! Wish me luck!

Let me just say, I freaked when it was implied Martha crossed the Void. I was too happy that she didn't. Love Rose, but my girl belongs in her own dimension. You are becoming one of my favorite Doctor Who writers! I love your Doctor/Martha stuff. Off to read another. Keep up the excellent work.

lol, loved this! The part where you described everything Martha did in the story? Such a troll moment. XD

Very nice story and I'm happy to re-read it again! (and to be able to leave reviews [again] from my second account!)

Ah, I loved this chapter too! The Master cracked me up really...XD

Lol, I love the Doctor-Master interaction. Ah, reading this chapter always makes me laugh. :D