awesome story great job

great story! It was cute :)

Cliff hangers will be cliff hangers ,

You. Must. Absolutely. Expound. On. This. MORE.

Please take the 'more' in noteable consideration.

You left me 'kyah!-ing to the heavens with happy frustatration!

Aww, that was so sweet! ] Hikaru and Kaoru are my favorite characters from Ouran, I love them to death.

And the fact that you wrote this is so ironic for me because I've recently put Twilight down and gotten addicted to Ouran, and I had just finished reading all of the manga when I saw this in my inbox! XD It was so cool... I hadn't even been reading fanfiction in a while and here was one of my favorite Twilight authors writing about something completely different that I loved. Your writing is amazing, so keep up the good work! 3