sequel!

I love it, you should make it longer! Contact me if you want to

yessss, this. haha, while watching the scene, kirk totally had this kind of face. not to mention, scotty looked at uhura weirdly when she walked out. which made me think he thought there was something going on between the two from what he saw happen with the future!spock thing. :D

anyway, kudos to you! this is the only jealousy kink regarding that scene.

Great job! I could feel Kirk's anger myself.

And the last few lines, lol. Never thought about that possibility. A perfectly logical explanation for an apparently illogical heated kiss.

PD: Uhura is kind of a bitch in the movie, you should really try and watch some of the original series in which she's really sweet (and totally into Kirk, not Spock btw XD).

Nicely done.

hehehe loved it thanks for sharing x

Nice! I wouldn't call this Kikr too angry at all...and I loved how Spock was actually wanting Kirk! Also, Kirk points out a huge slash point (that Kirk gets Spock to show emotion), so bravo for that! Faved.

"I'll be monitoring your frequency." Creepiest line ever...

yay! Saw this movie unwillingly (cause this movie is the reason why im not a loowed to go to cons.. Mum says that the star trek junkies at a con are probably just as scary as the anime ones (which is trues in some cases, but really mum? D:))

ANYWAYS. so yeah. it was an okay movie, and when i got to this part i was like: Oh haw haw, they likes each other. :}D3

so im glad you turned it in a fic! A very good one, indeed! :D3

Sequel sequel sequel! Yes *nodnod* Kick her ass Kirk! *ahem* sorry xD I love jealousy fics, and this scene was pretty damn perfect for one i thought while i watched it.

The kind that makes you want to bash their heads together.

Cool. -grins-.

Well written.

Don't worry, the Star Trek fandom is where all the slash started, after all. Really good story; you did a wonderful job of capturing Kirk's emotions.

Who knows? Maybe there will be more yaoi moments in the sequels? But Kirk was known as a womanizer, not to burst your bubble.

well as a fellow fan but not a total trekie i liked it...the second the two came on screen i couldn't get the pairing out of my head as the movie progressed.

I love it! Very nicely written. You got Kirk's feelings perfectly!

O.O

update/continue PLEASE?

this is really, really good - a glorious mix of in-character-ness and romantic tension... can't wait for more!