love the lukabeth sweetness!

It was nice. It could have been a bit longer. Maybe with a description of her bruices or something. But the idea was really good. :)

Secret,

I'm sorry I couldn't PM you, but if you go anonymous...

The point is that its not a percabeth story, It's not really supposed to be a romantic story, This is set before Percy even came to CHB, remember?

I'm sorry for wasting everyone else's time but seriously "secret", don't read a story you don't like just to give a pointless review.

Love Always,

~Annabeth Short

PERCABETH,PERCABETH,PERCABETH

Yes, it was very good, a sweet story :)

Good Job, I like this story so far :)

great maggertins (hehe) i lurv ur story and im really hyper so ill be super tired at school tomorrow R says hi and if u pm me tonight ill send u a message cuz we need to talk bye

That was a pretty good story but you should talk more about getting the hat

Good story though

oh this is pretty cute, you have a very good writing style.

Coolio. I like it but you need more description. Great job! P.S. I liked the part near the end with Connor.

a little short. you probally could have just made a one-shot about Athena giving her the hat on her b-day. This is pretty good though. update soon.

i love it! its nice that there are storys about camp without percy- not that i dont like Percy, i just never get to read it!

-M.O.

Not bad. Work on the grammar. Your content seems to have mostly dialogue, though, and inflection. Add a little description.

Well...okay, but I think that it should be a little bit longer. I also think that Athena just gave it to her daughter for her b-day.