That was wicked good and super creative! Great job!

Nice story.

Loved how it ened! good job! :)

COKE DUH! I LOVE MASS AND DERRICK! The whole which team wins should be kept a surprise!

LOVE the cliff hanger at the end!

I liked this chapter

good. just fix your spelling! :)

cute chapter

Loved it! I like in your version how massie likes soccer and Alicia can run. just check your spelling! :)

sounds good so far. Massie block playing soccer who would have thought?

Omg this story is great! I read another story your wrote about Derrick and Massie meeting around summer time, I forget what it was called but I do know I LOVED it, just like how I love this! Magnificent work:)

OH MI GOD!I LUVD DIS!SO MUCH!

So, I found this story again randomly some way or another and I decided I wanted to make a long review for it:) Since I've never reviewed it and it's such an awesomtastical story and there's nothing on Mtv that's interesting me and I just have the urge to even though you finished it like last month and I pm'ed you about how much I loved it. So:

This Massington was, Freaking Amazing. I love that:

1) Alicia is a really fast runner (Haha, I mean c'mon, pretty funny, coz yeah.)

2) It's freaking Massington! The most amazing pairing in the history of forever!

3) Claire and Josh sorta kinda have a tiny little miniscule "thing" for each other. Yay for Closh.

4) You made Derrick Harrington completely irresistible *Dreamy Sigh*

5) Olive got like basically "dissed yo," in the end by Derrick. Mwahhaha.

So those were some extremely random reasons, but not the only reasons FYI.

And the ending! I love how it's not completely fluffy, but still makes you wanna scream with joy! And in some messed up way, I'm kinda glad your leaving it up to our imagination! Although I would kill for a sequel *Wink Wink nudge nudge* Nahh, I'm fine fawning over Simple Complications. Which you should cough update cough:D

And The chapter and I'm not sure which one it was... when Massie and Derrick like got to know eachother, on the balcony, when she was sick? Yeah, that was made of pure love. It made me squeal and scream and smile and I LOVED it.

:)

:D

:]

And... Okay I had to go check, now i can say... And Chapter 12, Truth Vs. Lies (Love how you do the Vs. thing for the name of each chapter btw) was my favorite:D. The ending especially! Gahh, it was freaking amazing!

"So I'm a distraction for you?"

*Kiss*

"More than you'll ever know"

AW!

So yeah, anyways sorry for the completely lame review.

Amazing story!

Amazing writing!

Already faved!

Okay. I like this story but first of all Massie has lived in Westchester all of her life. She is an Alpha and doesn't freak in situations like this. She also has a ton of money so she wouldn't have left her purse on the bus. She would be afraid some LBR would steal it. She could've gotten a cab. DUH!

I love this story! It had such a great ending, super cute, and creative. When I showed this story to my friend, she was so inspired she wants to be an auther when she grows up now! :) Shes already started on a writing storys, I hope it makes you feel good that you inspird some one. This is one of the best storys that I (or my friend) will ever forget!

~ RoswellPhah~