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YadirySXEWWE chapter 1 . 8/2/2012 Mmmmm gotta love that roughsexbetween them :P |
HeyDW chapter 1 . 3/4/2011 DDAAAAAAAAAYYYUUUMMMMM! ;D |
CodyRhodesFan chapter 1 . 9/14/2009 Angry Jeff...that do me no good. They kissed! He drew blood from Punk's mouth? Ouch. Punk is crying? Aw... Muffin? Cupcake? Aw... I loved the ending. Awesome. For some reason, Punk being the girlbig turn on for me. I must not speak, I myself write Punk as a dominant. I should do something about that in another fic or something. :) Anyways, back to you, this is hot... yummy and hot. I loved that Jeff was so dominant. Pure Punkie. Though now, I'm hungry. Anytime I'll eat a cupcake, I'll think of Jeff now. :P |
Spirit De Mortis chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 lol...we all knew thats what Jeff's real endeavor is! that was cannon slash scenario right there nad you had my idea down great! nicely done! |
Obsessed1one chapter 1 . 6/11/2009 Wow that was intense...I didn't like Jeff like that, but wow, that was intense! |
xAngelofHardyx chapter 1 . 6/10/2009 hello there i just got through reading your story betral i thought it was really good |
Glamagirl chapter 1 . 6/9/2009 *Gasps* That was distubingly hot! Loved it! |
246kisses chapter 1 . 6/9/2009 I'm not sure I like being an asshole like that. But it was still a good story.8P |
Jess1186 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 Great story. Jeff is a good top... especially when he's all angry and shit! |
NeroAnne chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 Okay. I see. Jeff does make a hot top...but with Punk...sheesh! You wrote it so well that it actually gave me goosebumps! I mean, I really didn't want it to end! I loved the taunting and when Jeff called Punk, "Cupcake" I almost lost it. The way I picture him saying it...wow. Yup. Punk needed punishment..still can't believe he did that to Jeff, but let me tell ya, it makes for awesome fiction, like this. FAVES. |
AnonymousPunk chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 Aww poor Punky. I hope Matt or someone kicks Jeff's ass for that :P Nice work though |
SkyeEyes16 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 OH damn. Haha! Love this pairing though I'm not entirely fond of the rape. I can't wait to see other stories result from Extreme Rules, even though most of it really sucked last night. |
Esha Napoleon chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 Great story ;) |