This is an amazing plot for a story. Great idea

Love this.

Willy wonka is evil anyway

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Thank you all my reviewers for your posts; positive, negative & neutral the lot of them.
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This is certainly a... different... concept.

... the mere concept of this is an unholy abomination... but damn if you didn't write it well regardless. O.o

Rather dark, but I wouldn't mind reading more.

this has potential...

cliches or not, I would also love to read more of this one.

I was a tad wary about this concept, but I like it so far. Here's hoping you do more on it.

aww, you end it there?

would love more of this one too...

I REALLY wish you'd continued this version of your own challenge...

This is an awesome plot. Please contact me and tell me someone took it up or that you will turn it into a full story.

Very interesting plot. If anyone took it please let me know so I can read it. Also I would really like it if you made it a full story. All the rest of your story’s are awesome and I would expect nothing else if you did it to this one.