I-... I stopped at the "I'm fifteen" part... Nah, I know that they are young in the show but... nope. Not reading smut about kids doing it. Wasnt imaging them as kids in the show... excluding aang. I honeslty dont know what to say *sigh* the fact that-... I'm just gonna stop myself here. You pointed out that Katara was still a kid and then proceed to write a lemon about it. Child porn is illegal, writing fantasys where it blatantly points out the fact that their children shouldnt be okay either.

Realistic characterization. Epic.

The start of this was so cute and the ending was just fantastic!

This is excellent, love so much about it

Recommend for those lads.

just putting it out there that this is favorite zutara smut so thank you for that

This was awesome

Loved it, was super hot! Good storyline too

Just, wauw!

I'm actually... Even though it wasn't shown on screen the creators of Avatar confirmed that Katara and Jet did kiss when they first met, but the rest of the fanfic is okay.

Well done. You DEFINITELY tons of effort into this fiction, great read.

This was okay

I want more sezy one-shots. :)

So we’ll written wtf

At once touching, beautifully descriptive, perfectly in character, smutty, and at the same time keeping with the characters and source material, somehow hilarious. I know I’m late to the zutara fandom, but this is absolutely masterful.