*dies laughing* Oh my god. Awesome.

Very clever!

Good one :)

I like the way you let charlie make an assumption while it was in fact completely different. It just shows how easy it is to believe things due to circumstansial evidence. FelicityT

Scared me for a second there.

Loved it just loved it, really tickled by this, I didn't see it coming. Please write some more. lol

oommee! dude ur an awsum writer! cant wait til the rest of the story! btw: yes i hv read the sequel! its an awsum idea! i was like roflmfao the whole way thru it! i sent the link to lyk a zillion twi-hard friends and even a few twi-haters! most of them thought it was awsum and even sum of the twi-haters said it was awsum, tho sum as soon as they saw the word twilight went off at me... any way, for the spelling and grammar i read the thing before the sequel and i am appalled that a person would write that! though i would probably suggest getting someone to edit your work before you post it, i do this for a few friends (they have a joke that i swallowed a dictionary as they say that they dont thnk a word exists that i cant define and spell) via email, and they say its actually helped! i would recomend you get a friend to do that...

anywayzz keep up the good work! L-O-V-E the idea!

xox

omg this is too funny

This was GENIUS.

I was laughing my ass off the whole time!

OMFG

that was hilarious!

LOVED IT

awesome...hehe, don't u jut luv Charlie's assumptions

aww crap i was laughing like hell..poor poor charlie..ahahahahah

THAT WAS HYSTERICAL! I was laughing my butt off the whole time!

LOL! I am still cracking up! WOW! Charlie, is SUCH a weirdo! HAHAHAHA! It was AWESOME!

That was SO FUNNY!

Love Always,

Sammy