I don't know why but I'm an Inuyasha lover\hater, thanks for the awesome story.
Oh and before I forget, what was the songs name?
Hope 2 tlk bye

lol i hate inuyasha and kinkyhoe!

The idea is good, but the story doesn't flow yet. It's choppy and lack of grammar and misspelled words don't help. Needs polishing. But remember the idea is a good one. I like that Kikiyo really wants Naraku (ick). Keep working on it.

Ok, as you admitted, you aren't quite experienced. However, let me tell you this:I seriously wonder how old you are. Because honestly, I think even a 5-year-old has a better English than you. I'm sorry, but I could hardly understand your story, and don't give me that "I'm inexperienced, it's ideas that matter" bullshit. It's the same damn idea as almost all Sesshomaru x Kagome fanfiction, so forgive me but I don't believe you. I would suggest you learn some grammar and then start writing again. Ja ne!

sad but ok

I love the story but how is it no one remembers that Sesshomaru only has his left arm? I think it's his left anyway. I will find out in a few minuets lol

It was cute, and unexpected. Poor Inuysha.

But seriously, your grammar is lacking. Your missing out millions of capitals! Names and speeches always start with capitals!

Other than that it was cute.

Keep Writing!