You should add a character death warning in the description please.

Heartbreaking

Ohmygodohmygodohmygod

I did not understand what was going on the entire story until the very end. And then you abruptly broke my heart, cleanly, splitting in half right down the centre.

That was so beautifully, depressingly, tragically wonderful.

I want you to know that you are the only writer (fanfiction or proffesional) that has EVER made me cry. I want to thank you, it feels good to cry about something not real... You should consider becoming a proffesional, I for one would read anything you wrote.

So, um, I wrote more angst while I was, um, thinking of you... and I was just feeling dark. But this is... you like headbands? How about a crown? I think you're the queen of angst.

oh god this made me cry. no joke, it was so amazing and raw and realistic and cynical and so derek and casey. f'ing amazing job :)

Holy .

Man... So I have a confession to make... I totally fanfic stalk you. Okay, no. But I go to your profile, and pick a new story at random (so many to choose from!), and read it once, twice, maybe thrice. And each one is so. damn. good. And each one has so much feeling.

I have to say that this particular one is my favorite outside of iAm and iSometimes. At least so far. It's so raw, so real. And I feel for Derek so much. And it helps that I've always subconsciously shipped Dasey. And the end there...whoa. Man, I'ma .ing cry.

"( okay maybe not, his hair is much too nice to be treated so horrifically )" It's oh so very Derek.

"It’s when she kills him ( when she completes him )" The contradictions just make it so real, so him.

"( he can smell burning rubber and hear the glass crack and shatter and he can taste the blood mixed with her vanilla lip gloss )" The phrases, the descriptions in the parenthesis are so real, and they make the story.

This kinda reminds me a lot of my brother. (not in the romantic way, of course. Incest, blech) But just, you know...I dunno. Never mind. It's late. I'ma go to bed.

Or I'll prolly just read something else from you profile.

Later, Bons.

So deep. I loved how you structured this. 9/10

This was really good! Please write another?

Depressing much?

That made me tear up and probably ruined my mascara, not impressed Miss (Jokes, of course I am, that was some good shit)

Update soon, x

I think deep down I knew she was dead, but somehow it didn't hit me until I read it.

Anyway, this is fantastic (and I really don't say that a lot). Usually I'm really neurotic about the little details in writing, however this came together as a whole, and you made me forget to look for mistakes (I know! It's such an illness) and just focus on the story - which by the way was one of the best things I've read in a while.

So thank you for writing this.

SOb!

That was really good. I cried :(

AH!

Did they get into the accident cause they were making out?

Derek died at the end right?

So there was a happy ending!

Oh! So good, but so sad at the same time. I think you did a great job. And yes, isn't WhenLighteningStrikes just AMAZING? I think she's an inspiration to us all. :D

Dark, depressing...and powerful. This was a gut punch yet ultimately a welcome one. I had no clue what was happening until the end but once there I not only understood but also felt it. Beautifully accomplished.

Gah! Bonnie! Oh, my God, you have no idea how amazing this is. It's probably one of the best Daseys I've evereverever read! I'm not sugarcoating it, either.

I always loveadoresqueal when you write in the detailed form. It's always so deep and beautiful, and it just makes me swoon inside.

You're an amazing author, Bonnie darlin'. :)

And I miss you!

-Kana