Reviews for Watermelons
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 5/4/2019
Fantastic
Warswrath chapter 1 . 2/26/2018
Ha ha I love the ending
Aethelgythe chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
Most hilarious one-shot fic. :)

I always did find it amusing since the first time in the show when Metabee had a mini spaz attack outside Henry's store, leading to his subsequent capture at the sight of the melon...complete missing the fact there was a net just beneath it. Lol
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
Short,sweet and funny! A delightful read!
TheNightshade43 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
This was fun to read!
Short, simple, and enjoyable.
One has to wonder what Metabee wants with the watermelon (even if he has no idea himself), and it's great to see a character note this.
Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
...I... actually never thought about that either. It's not like he could eat it. XD

I got a god laugh out of this. Nice fic! :D
Lombriz-Solitaria chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Why did Medabee fall for the watermelon trap, anyway? That's possibly the greatest question.
Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Another cute Rokusho and Metabee oneshot!
MedaPrincess chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
lol! love the ending!
Yuro-faita911 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
XD Metabee's plan got busted bwuahahaha

anyway I love it :) very soft and funny _
autobotgirl12328 chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
OMG LOL! loving it! loving it times three! :D:D:D:D:D
Sar the hedgehog chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
lol! This is good! XD Ya, how could he eat it? hahaha!
Nook Sundry chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
This is such a gem. Short and sweet, cleverly written and totally in-character. Love it!
Blaze Raptor chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
ROFL! I can so picture something like this happening. You wrote Metabee and Rokusho well. Awesome job!
Saskie chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
R.O.F.L. *favourites* Thanks Mel-chan! It's great to see them both in character too! Hope you write more!

Saskie
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