| Reviews for The Delicate Dance of Marriage |
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   Nida926 chapter 33 . 3/20 What a pathetic story! wasted so much time on this story! Pathetic,desperate Bella...YUCK! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2019 Some of the grammar is total shit |
| vampirelady13 chapter 2 . 4/5/2019 Spineless Bella in the house. I would tell his exactly why they split up. Bella is such a coward. I think I will stop reading this but good luck |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2019 Can you please finish this story? I know you might have moved on from the fan fiction universe .But this story needs to be will be a gross injustice to leave this one unfinished. |
| canada02 chapter 33 . 1/13/2019 Coucou Très belle histoire que je ai lue ce week-end Je garde espoir que vous là repreniez un jour Cordialement Bree |
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/4/2018 Do you have plans of continuing this at some point? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/20/2018 Having bella be all "oh god how I wanted to his him, lick him. . ." at their divorce proceedings where she is divorcing him for CHEATING doesn't really seem right does it? It makes Bella appear pathetic and desperate. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/20/2018 Edward saying that "it was a mistake" makes him sound guilty. But isn't this the weird one where tanya jumped into his bed while he was in the shower? Then why have him incriminate himself? |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/20/2018 I don't understand bella- at all. And I would have thougt that Felixs bidding would have been welcome so she didnt have to dance with Edward. But she acted like he was doing something wrong. Honestly? You version of Bella sucks. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/20/2018 I don't know if its just your writing or if you meant to make it so but bella comes off as erratic and annoying. Its gotta just be the writing because this is hard to follow. Bella is all over the fucking place. And why in the fuck wouldn't she have divorced his ass along time ago if he cheated on her? Why wait around? Especially if he's constantly photographed with other women? |
| Guest chapter 33 . 9/18/2018 Hope you come back! |
| grandmachix chapter 33 . 9/18/2018 WHAT?! NO! You can't stop here! Who is trying to kill Bella? What will Jacob say when they confront him? It's been 6 years since you updated. Did you just walk away and say "I don't want to finish this." Did real life kick you down? Judy |
| CoppertopJ chapter 33 . 8/15/2018 Any chance you can update this story. Or finish it? |
| mounds01 chapter 33 . 7/29/2018 This story is great! I like how there is romance, little smut, drama and mystery and very well written. I don't know how I missed this story because I read fanfic every day. I hope that you will be able to finish this story, it would be a shame to let this story slide. Great Job! |
| Guest chapter 33 . 5/2/2018 This year it'll be 6 years since you updated, I hope you'll comeback one day |
