| Reviews for Smoke In the Wind |
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   Vadercat chapter 14 . 6/7 Excellent viewpoint of the goings on of that storyline. |
| spicyanemones chapter 14 . 7/17/2017 YES YES YESSSSS! I'VE BEEN SEARCHING FOR THIS STORY FOR SUCH A LONG TIME AND I FINALLY FOUND IT. For days, I've been looking for this story, but the only part I remembered clearly was Ziva thinking what Tali felt like as she died. And finally I found it! This story is wonderful and the only part I could remember ("oh Tali, was it like this for you when the world exploded around you, did you feel yourself shattering or did you just disappear?") still makes me cry everytime I read it. Thank you skipping much for writing this absolutely breathtaking story! |
| abrant554 chapter 14 . 2/26/2017 There is only one thing wrong with this story...it ended. Must say, it started off slowly and was tempted to 'abandon', but really happy I didn't. Loved it. Thanks so much. |
| MSerrada chapter 14 . 10/3/2015 I know this story is years old, but I wanted to say how much I admire your storytelling and writing style. You evoke so many emotions and visuals with your words and that's a wondrous ability. I frequently find myself rereading your works and marveling at how moving and immersive they are. Thank you for your skill and efforts in creating these pieces of art. |
| ancilla89 chapter 6 . 2/15/2015 Wow. That was awesome! |
| starryjules chapter 14 . 7/19/2011 Okay, now I got better and am no longer reviewing every other chapter. This was just an amazing story. I have read very few post-Aliyah fics that tackled the season finale as well as you did. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us! |
| starryjules chapter 7 . 7/19/2011 No such thing as too much ninja! Most people write really well for just one or two characters but struggle with some of the harder voices (IMHO, Abby, Ziva, Vance). You've nailed them all though. And major love for this: "She should have known better - she who was baptised by fire in another world, where fathers lie and sisters die and a daughter sings low and sweet over the body of a son." |
| starryjules chapter 6 . 7/19/2011 Nerves unfounded. Chapter astounding. Extra awesomeness points for the Russian which has been making me smile giddily for the last few chapters. Onward I read! |
| starryjules chapter 4 . 7/19/2011 Another beautiful one - you are the master of making parenthetical comments flow through a story! The add so much to Tony's inner dialogue. |
| starryjules chapter 2 . 7/19/2011 The plan was to wait and only review at the end of the story, but after only two chapters, I have to stop and give praise! Achingly beautiful chapter...the dream sequence was just fantastic. I can't wait for what you've got coming! |
| dracosnumber1girl chapter 14 . 12/29/2010 Absolutely amazing. The development was really believable (though I did get confused a couple of times with some of the stuff in italics, just had to reread those parts a few times). Overall a fabulous story! |
| A Smiling Cat chapter 14 . 9/20/2010 You did a great job with this story ! I really liked it, but the end left me with a strange unfinished feeling ... But it was really good ! -Cat :) |
| Broken Ghost chapter 14 . 7/19/2010 Okay, I've permanently copy and pasted this story to my ipod so I can sneakily read it in school where I have no internet! It really is that good - best thing I've read in ages. My favourite chapters were 1, 4 and 11. |
| Nanuk chapter 14 . 5/11/2010 Wow, brilliant story! Wonderful writing and great description! |
| Moon FireStar chapter 8 . 3/8/2010 all I can say is ...you just made me cry(my poor Ziva!) |
