Read it all in one day, captivating read! Nahuel’s plotline was hilarious! I just kinda wished Leah might have imprinted on him, hahahah, it would be interesting and really funny!
Anyways off to read the sequel i guess :D

So good, congrats.

This an excellent take off on the canon version. Good interpretation.

Not boring! Anxious for more.

If this your first endeavor at writing, you have hit a home run. Good story & I like your style.(Wondering if you still read the comments.)

I've read this story a thousand times ... I love your stories in general, hopefully continue writing them, and do other stories ... thank you very much for sharing them ...

I've read this story like 100 times ... I love it ... I love your stories in general, hopefully continue writing them, and do other stories of Seth and Abigail among others ... thank you very much for sharing them .

Are you going to write a story on GRIFFIN..pretty pls...waiting waiting

Worse

U Could have written more dialogues rather than like a story being narrated.

Your story really made me feel a lot better with my self I don't y but it did and if you reading this it would make my day if you made as equal with Remy and Jacob's future daughter(I already read all of them)

Great, great story! Haven't read a Nessie/Jacob story in a while but glad I read yours! Going to go read the sequel now~

I believe you have achieved a pretty credible 17yr old Jake so your on the right track so far.

Hey!
I just wanted to review to tell you how much I love your story. Unfortunately, I'm French, so I can't tell you all I want to -I don't know how.
So I'll just let you a small review, and go read the sequel.
Thank you!

Not boring at all; I find it to be a great plot twist, and I want to know exactly what is going on. I know you'll get to the wedding, and I'll be right there reading it when you do.

Carry on : )