This is so great, loved it from start to finish. Flows naturally and seems very in character for the two characters when something happens. It won't just be fireworks, it'll be those embers that burn low and long keeping things warm.

Excellent from start to finish.

Thanks for sharing.

T.

I'm smacked even more if that's possible.

Aw! This is a great story. I'm a huge Mac/Stella ahipper, and I can totally picture this. So sweet! Keep up the good work!

This is really cute, and I totally understand the "Melina Moment" reference. I was actually thinking of that when I read it lol. Either way, this was a great story.

really sweet! Love it! x

I loved this story! I was looking at your profile and noticed you are also a huge fan of cath and gil. They rule!

Sweet thing *g*

Thanks for sharing

whoa... it is so lovely fanfic...

WAY COOL!

I've seen the video but what moment was this story inspired by?

Whay a lovely story, I espcially liked Mac at the begining and how he is comparing his life now, to how it was without Stella. I see what you mean about the Melina moments video, not sure I can see Mac knowing the showtunes, but I guess Stella has converted him! x

that was absolutely precious! loved the splenda/sugar comparison...keep writing!

Great story! I really enjoyed it! As soon as I read the allusion and Mac's response I thought of the Melina Moment thing, the only difference being that Mac got the reference right and Gary Sinise never does from what she said! Adorable story!

Aw, that was so perfect! Hope you'll write more.

aw to cute loved it

Oh this was wonderful! And sugar is one of my favourite things XD Seriously, I began my day with toast and jam, and continued with marshmallows and a chocolate covered cereal bar. i have sturdy teeth XD This was so sweet and lovely! i just loved the image of Mac coming in and smiling at the sight of Stella sleeping with his pillow cuddled up to her, and I loved the idea of the sugar and the splenda, and would have to agree. And wow, who would not want Mac as their pillow? Let me take a moment there... Okay, back :P Very sweet moment with the musical reference, I've heard about that I think, you'll have to confirm for me. Can't for for your next chapter also!